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1/15/2011 22:59:34   
Razen
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Well, if it were a repetition style of poem it was good, perhaps inspiring enough to make me put a piece of poetry on Elitus's Desk in Part IV.

Congratulations, you got 2nd page!

< Message edited by Shinobi Shadowmaster -- 1/15/2011 23:00:03 >
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1/15/2011 23:01:00   
Mordred
Member

Thanks. I was kinda worried about the poem. I kinda hashed it together as I went along. :P

*hopes more people start reading since I now have some readers*

< Message edited by Mordred -- 1/15/2011 23:08:01 >
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1/15/2011 23:10:43   
Razen
Member

Here's the poem I will have.

quote:

The Song of Mortimer & Mordred's Final Fight:

Blades clang, the heavens fell unsung,
A father and son, in only one on one,
The son hath no remorse, slashing through leaving no open path,
Armies surround, where they are abound,
A final series of strikes, the father falls the son hath greater might.
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1/15/2011 23:12:20   
Mordred
Member

I'm quite fond of it. ^^
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1/15/2011 23:13:33   
Razen
Member

Yeah! Also, I think I need a word to rhyme in the last line though.

Also, I wish I had some readers. *Frowning Maliciously*

< Message edited by Shinobi Shadowmaster -- 1/15/2011 23:15:21 >
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1/15/2011 23:29:07   
Mordred
Member

Yes, we all want attention.

I wonder what Mritha will think, and whether Komoto and glaisaurus will start reading.
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1/15/2011 23:30:24   
Razen
Member

Well, Mritha is awaiting my Part IV, so this will be a miracle to her, probably, and hath thou kept pace with mine updates?

Also, Glaisaurus is supposedly reading through my updates, and Komoto hasn't read my L&L at all.

< Message edited by Shinobi Shadowmaster -- 1/15/2011 23:32:12 >
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1/15/2011 23:31:18   
Mordred
Member

Sorry, no. Mid-Terms have kinda screwed with my time here. I'll start reading right away! *buries self into text on screen*
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1/15/2011 23:33:21   
Razen
Member

Now, imagine if I hadn't been bored by the Finals, I would be at around Part VII already, where Galith unfortunately bites the dust.
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1/16/2011 0:11:28   
Mordred
Member

Hmmmmmm... I might come out with another update today, depending on how well I can type on an iTouch(computers are in lock-down mode until 6:00 Server Time).

I can't. This thing doesn't let me scroll down the text box. *le sigh*

< Message edited by Mordred -- 1/16/2011 0:16:24 >
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1/16/2011 14:16:41   
Mordred
Member

Another small update. The story's progressed some more and I changed the format around to make it easier to understand the flow. Enjoy!
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1/16/2011 14:27:30   
Razen
Member

Getting more and more powerful I see.
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1/16/2011 14:28:35   
Mordred
Member

And he doesn't even know what the hell he's doing. :P
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1/16/2011 14:29:46   
Razen
Member

That's a plot twist. But, still doesn't beat the irony of Elkrei.
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1/16/2011 17:07:15   
Condor
Member

Its good......& I liked the Kingdom Hearts reference....
Im only up to Drakkonnans entrance to Terra but its still good so far
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1/19/2011 16:51:27   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 *runs into the thread* hurray for updates! *starts reading*

EDIT:
quote:

To find Ivanur now planted in he stomach. Mordred had somehow pulled off teleportation, a study of magic not yet discovered. He seemed to embrace his biological father as he fell into his arms, a silent moan escaping his lips. However, he quickly grabbed and snatched the Amulet at the dying elf's neck, and dropped him down to the ground, where his blood began to pool. Knowing that Mortimer was in no condition to heal himself, Mordred began to stride out of the room. But before he left with his army, he placed a ward on the chamber, so that no magic could be cast to heal the writhing form on the floor. And thus passed away the final Elder...



Dam! Thats just...... thats just cold. I like it though, and how he became a god? Wow. Just wow.

< Message edited by Mritha -- 1/19/2011 17:07:45 >
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1/19/2011 17:13:05   
Mordred
Member

}-] What can I say? He's bent on justice. He'll never let family ties get in the way. Well, actually... It gets really, really, really complicated. All in due time, of course. But worry not, Mortimer's part in this tale is not yet done.
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1/19/2011 17:13:39   
Razen
Member

Mritha: Navith, Kahumot, and Thalack are viler.
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1/19/2011 17:18:34   
Mordred
Member

@Razen: You ain't seen nothin' yet. Mordred is absolutely a utilitarian. He will pay whatever price is necessary.
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1/19/2011 17:20:42   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 So I noticed *is excited about the next update*
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1/19/2011 17:22:04   
Mordred
Member

Well, I have nothing to do until tomorrow's AQ release, and then nothing 'till Friday... Expect many updates...
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1/19/2011 17:23:38   
Razen
Member

Mordred: Kahumot has killed off entire races for the fun of it. Thalack destroyed many civilizations for no reason beyond starting wars. And, Navith is well, corruption in every degree. They will do the worst of things without reason, beyond it's fun. Also, have you read Part IV?

< Message edited by Shinobi Shadowmaster -- 1/19/2011 17:24:37 >
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1/19/2011 17:24:16   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Dam, now I need to make a run to walmart tomorrow. I'm out of popcorn.
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1/19/2011 17:25:16   
Razen
Member

Mritha: Nice language, also why are you devouring the world's supply of popcorn so much!?
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1/19/2011 17:27:00   
Mordred
Member

@Razen: I guess I'll explain Mordred's logic, as it will soon become very apparent: Humans are the source of misery. If humans will not learn(from him), then they must all be eliminated. Every last one. In the whole multiverse. Plus, you're not gonna like how one must meet Chaos. It will require too much blood to comprehend. But, I guess I'll stop spoiling things now.
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