Mritha
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@gal, I will once I figure out what to do with it. I like what I did so far in the rewrite, but a major problem that I can't get past is one of the key things in the story was that the main villain needed to be trying to kill the hero. Sepulchure could not and at first, didn't want to. Only after the hero ticked him off enough that he wanted to kill them, just couldn't because the master would not allow it. Secondly, darkness is pitifully overused, so I want to change the natural attunement of the hero's element to something other than darkness or light. Thirdly, I'm highly considering swapping the gender of the hero to male. I had reasons for it to be female, but after learning a few things from the game, that little side story can no longer exist. The most common character in DF is a male warrior, so that is what I'm considering changing it to. As it stands, I'm toying with several ideas on a possible backstory for him but have not settled on one yet. The rest of ADL has been posted and now complete. TLoaH, along with several other stories I have going and ideas yet to be started, are now next on the list. @Mort, From start to finish everything has been redone.
< Message edited by Mritha -- 10/19/2012 19:25:26 >
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