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11/25/2010 17:45:11   
a person 1991
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Starting plot ( Sorry I forgot to put this in ) :
The is the story about 4 (very) young adults .
Who are having a difficult life .
2 of this (very) young adults know each other and the other 2 are brother and brother .
They will find out why everything happend in their lives .
They will make difficult choices .
All in this exiting story !
Genre : Adventure , Fantasy , ( Some ) Suspence , and Drama

( I know it may be a little boring to read but it's something i'm slightly proud of )

( And yes , I am new at this )

( Also , agian i try to keep as G rated as possible )

If you want to comment on this story please comment on this forum :

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=18375199&mpage=1&key=�


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Chapter 1 : "The 4 letters"
Part 1 : " The bloody door"



alarm clock : * ring , ring , ring ! *
Valerustis : *(VERY LOUD) YAWN ! * ugh .. it's 5:45 am ... why do I smell fire ... what the heck happend here ???
GAH!
Valerustis's mom : Wake up ! it's 7:00 , you over slept ! now go take care of the horses and what not ?
Valerustis : Yes mom * sigh * ... taking care of the horses hmmm ...
Valerustis's mom : we ran out of milk and fruit and go to the store and get some .
Valerustis : Fine ...

* OUTSIDE THE HOUSE *

Valerustis : Hey Ottel , how's it going ??
Ottel : Hey ! Not much , you ???
Valerustis : not much either i'm going to the store to get my mom some food and whatnot ...
Ottel : Ok I bet I can beat you to the store . :P
Valerustis : yeah ? You really think so ?
Ottel : Yeah ! I really think so !

* When they get near the store *

Valerustis and Ottel : * Gasp * * cough *
Valerustis : heh ... you won this time ...
Ottel : Yeah ! well I gotta go my dad wants me to " train " me to be a knight .
Valerustis : well good luck with that !!!
Ottel : Thanks , bye !

* At Valerustis's house *

Valerustis : Hey mom i'm ... What happend here !?!?!

* Valerustis mom bleeding on the floor near the front door *
* Few seconds later the house is burning *

Valerustis's mom : *In a weakend voice* Go to your father *coughs blood* at ... * Dies *

To be continued ...


( Oh and I rate this ages 9+ i say mild words like stupid , dumb , and like i said * coughs blood * )




Please do not use signatures in the archive. Signature removed. Kindly, Fleur Du Mal.

< Message edited by Fleur Du Mal -- 12/3/2010 12:57:18 >
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11/26/2010 13:07:56   
a person 1991
Member

Chapter 1 : "The 4 letters"
Part 2 : "Running away"



*IN THE TOWN OF SANDSEA *

Istnick : hmph . Just another day like always ... Alone here in sandsea ...
Dan : Hey Istnick !!!
Istnick : What ? can't you see i`m resting here besides I don't wanna be caught by the guards , so will you please keep it down !
Dan : Sorry , sorry . Anyways , I heard there was a rich guy , around the corner from here . He is moving , so quick before he moves out!
Istnick : Heh , I bet other bandits are out there also ...
Dan : True . So are you gonna sit out here or are you gonna rob some people ?
Istnick : Is that a R.E.A.L question?
Dan : For you ? No not really .
Istnick : " LET'S GO !!!! "
Dan : What I thought ...

* Running around Sandsea *

Istnick : Try to keep up !
Dan : * pant , gasp *
Istnick : y'know I don't wanna stay here in sandsea I wanna head out to moonridge or falconreach .
Dan : Are you kidding there's necromancers , deathknights ...
Istnick : * Interrupts * and Paladins ! Come on we'll be fine ...
Dan : But I hate the dark ...
Istnick : ... Fine then why don't we settle in oaklore keep or falchonreach .
Dan : Ok then off we go !

* Running past sandsea *
* Ran past valencia's zone *

Istnick : FINALLY ! Falchonreach !
Dan : Wow ! Even have a guardian tower . One of the last surviving ones !
Istnick : Ok i'll go into the inn and cheak us in , I want you to steal some weapons or gold or something useful !
Dan : Sure I can do that .

* Dans steal about 600 gold and got a HALF-OFF morning star ! *

Dan : Hey Istnick ! I got a morning star !
Istnick : Umm is that a half off one ?
Dan : yeah .... but I got 600 gold !!!
Istnick : well at least you got some things ... anyway , I got us a room and it's 5 gold a night so we gotta do some stealing ...
Dan : Sure I can always do that .




To be continued ...
DF  Post #: 2
11/26/2010 13:23:08   
a person 1991
Member

CHARACTER BIOGRAPHY'S !
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Valerustis : A 11 year old boy . His house recently burnt down and the loss of his mom . He never knew his dad , his mom always told him he's somewhere but alive .
He also his a friend named Ottel ( cheak his biography )
Base Elements : Fire and Energy
Secondary Elements : Evil and Metal
Likes : Running , doing chores .
Dislikes : Secrets and evil .
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Ottel : A 10 year old boy . Friends with Valerustis . Dreams of being a knight . His dad trains him .
Base Elements : Water and Ice
Secondary Element : Disease and Silver
Likes : Training , dreaming , and running .
Dislikes : Cats .

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Istnick : A 13 year old boy . Trained ranger and knight . Reacently moved from sandsea . Now lives in Falchonreach with his brother
Dan . ( see biography for dan ) Both parents died by sandsea guards .
Base Elements : Wind and Darkness
Secondary Element : Poison and good
Likes : Money , weapons , and Falchonreach .
Dislikes : Sandsea guards .

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Dan : A 9 year old boy . Partly trained ranger by his bother Istnick . Reacently moved from sandsea . Now lives in Falchonreach with his brother Istnick . both parents died by sandsea guards . Dan has a thing for stealing . He's young but very effectent in battle .
Base Elements : Earth and Light
Secondary Element : Nature and ???
Likes : Adventure , having fun .
Dislikes : Sleeping .


< Message edited by a person 1991 -- 11/26/2010 22:55:39 >
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11/26/2010 22:50:36   
a person 1991
Member

Chapter 2 : "Endless space"
Part 1 : "Appearences"


* IN THE TOWN OF FALCONREACH *

* IN ISTNICK'S ROOM*

Istnick : * DREAMING *
??? : You will die a bloody death !
Istnick : GAH! * panting * * gasping * My gawd ( i did'nt wanna spell g-*-d ) it was just a dream .
Istnick : I wonder where Dan is ... heh is always out having fun stealing , never liked sleeping ...

* SOMEWHERE ELSE IN FALCONREACH *

Valerustis : * Sob , Cry , Cough , Repeat *
Ottel : Hey stop * Sobing , Crying , Coughing , and repeating ? *
Valerustis : Your right I should be a man and TRY to be more optimistic .
Ottel : Stay at my house !
Valerustis : You know that is a great idea !

* As there walking towards Ottel's house *
* Dan smacks into Valerustis *

Dan : Ow ...
Valerustis: Hey try to be more careful next ...
Dan : *INTERRUPTS* I'm really sorry ! ( How does Istnick run so very fast but does'nt hit into people ???)

* AS ISTNICK FINDS DAN THEY ALL GET INTO CONVERSAYTION *

Istnick : So Dan this is where you've been .
Istnick : So what are your names ?
Valerustis : Well , my name is Valerustis .
Ottel : My name is Ottel .
Valerustis : what are your names ?
Istnick : My name is Istnick . This is my brother Dan .
Istnick : Anyway , where are you heading ?
Valerustis : Well my house burnt down and my mom was brutly murdered by i don't know who , So i'm staying over ottel's house .
Istnick : What a terror that must have be ...

* A VOID DRAGON APPEARS ! *


TO BE CONTINUED ...


< Message edited by a person 1991 -- 11/29/2010 19:55:15 >
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11/29/2010 20:32:07   
a person 1991
Member

Chapter 2 : " Endless space "
Part 2 : " Valerustis's secondary element "






Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : O....M......G !
Valerustis : How the heck are we going to defeat this thing or whatever it is ???
Ottel : Run , scream , call for help !
Istnick : C'mon we can defeat what this thing is !
Dan : What the heck is that ???
Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick : WE DON'T KNOW !
Dan : Great we are going to battle a thing that looks like a dragon , and we are not even KNIGHTS!
Istnick : I am a trained knight and ranger !
Valerustis : But you can't do it alone !
Istnick : Eh true !
Void dragon : Thinks : * They talk so much I just want someone to fight me my gawd *
Void dragon : JUST FIGHT ME ALREADY!
Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : That unidentified thing talks ?
Void dragon : I do ! I'm a dragon you know ! Thinks : * Wait are this children are the 4 letter prophecy ? *
Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : What kind of dragon ?!?!
Void dragon : A Void dragon !
Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : What the heck is a void ?
Valerustis : Thinks : * Can it be ? *
Void dragon : Ugh do I have to explain it ?
Valerustis : * Interrupts * Let me explain *ahem* a void is a corrupted place with bassically nothing in it only void dragons , void elementals , and other weird twisted monsters . Thinks : *How did I know that?*
Void dragon : And i`m gonna start killing you !
Istnick : Thinks : *This looks like that monsters in my dream ? Could it be ? *
Void dragon : You will die a bloody death !!!
Isnick : Thinks : * My gawd does everyone have weird dreams like these?*

* BATTLE SCEANE ! *


Void dragon : attacks : Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick and misses
Valerustis : a burn in his heart start to overwhelm him then a burst of ( Element : Evil ) light starts to burst

*Void dragon dies*

Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : MY GAWD HOW DID YOU DO THAT !?!?!
Valerustis : * Coughs blood , pant , deep breath , and repeat *
Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : Are you ok ???
Valerustis : I`m fine .
Istnick : thinks : * weird his name is Valerustis , his name is Ottel , my name is Istnick
, my brother's name is Dan ... Which means !!!!!!



To be continued ...
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12/5/2010 16:35:25   
a person 1991
Member

Chapter 3 : The element of ????
Part 1 : Never trust ...





Istnick : Thinks : * Naw it can't be i mean our first letter names spell V.O.I.D ! *
Istnick : You know guys our first letter names spell v.o.i.d !
Valerustis , Ottel , and Dan : That is creepy !
Istnick : We should go sneak some books !
Valerustis : I`m bad at stealing ! Besides why can't we just borrow !
Istnick : Borrowing ? I was rasied to steal !!!
Valerustis : Well , you`ll have to get used to it !

* Borrows books from the town hall *

Valerustis : See was not that hard BORROWING BOOKS!
Istnick : Ehh whatever ...
Valerustis : Ok it`s getting dark !
Ottel : We where staying at my house remember ?
Valerustis , Istnick , and Dan : Oh yeah ...
Ottel : So .. let`s go !
Dan : Why does your house to be near doomwood ?
Ottel : Stop complaining ! It`s not That bad !
Dan : I hate the dark ...
Valerustis : THINKS : * I wonder what that thing was and what is a void ? *
Dan : Hey theres a merchant , i`ll catch up with you guys !
Dan : Hi merchant ! do you have anything for sale !
Merchant : * STARES AT DAN *

Dan : ARRGH!! Thinks : * When did I get bloody ??? *

* Dan drops into a mysterious hole *

Dan : Where am I ??????????


To be continued ...


< Message edited by a person 1991 -- 12/5/2010 16:36:06 >
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