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Here I find myself drawn by mere curiosity. Here come the typos.
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a power to control a energy An.
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all my life I had to forage in the woods and eat the scraps from others tables to live. Grammatically speaking, what you want here is others'.
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Many of the villager hated me, threw rocks at me villagers.
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since no one in around there the 'in' is superfluous.
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Though I undernourished, I was still very strong Though I was undernourished.
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but by then it was to late too.
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I know they would not go in there. knew.
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she looks like a evil witch an.
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who care how she killed our princess cares.
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she was bit by a serpent in the woods bitten.
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their is a bite mark on her hand there.
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the princess had dies of snakebite died.
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At what would a girl like her be doing in the woods and.
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I back away, but ran into the shut door. backed.
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end of my hand a orb of dark energy an.
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quickly approaching then point where I knew I could not control it. the.
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I was the cause of the entire villages death? village's.
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I could tell from the from the noise outside Just one 'from the'.
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Ah, your finally awake. you're.
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followed the guard the door. 'guard out the door'.
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and there was few torches were
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either a statue of a knight, or a actual one an.
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I practices magic in secret practised.
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I will believe you argument that a snake killed Lily your
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I almost would have been more gratful to be killed grateful.
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so small their was no need to bar it. There.
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The knights shouts were getting steadily nearer to the castle, and I feared they may breach it. But then, a key groan in the lock of my cell door, and it opened. knights' and groaned, respectively.
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I wondered what the heck she was doing here off all places of.
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and since that town had one, I assume its you. it's
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I knew it Victoria would have a LOT of explaining to do if anyone found out that.
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you quite literally couldn't open it form the outside. from.
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or ice if they happened to be Bone Fire's. Bone Fires.
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and contemplated who in all the earth I was suppose to get up there. I knew mage's could learn levitation spells how, of Lore, supposed and mages, respectively.
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there were way to many undead. too.
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I notices some noticed.
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the realized with horror then.
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a advantage the other side wished to take an.
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but I could see the leader in all this mess couldn't.
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Yes, he over near the door. he is over.
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how many necro's could be in this particular fight? necroes.
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I fired a energy attack as a greeting an.
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I still levitated up a a lot to avoid attacks just one 'a'.
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undead slain and the medic's walking among the knights, treating they're wounds. medics and their, respectively.
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Tell you what, if your near Oaklore you're.
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By the way, what's you name? your.
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Yes, it that way. it is that way.
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the trail they were following was a animal trail an.
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Having grown up next/in the woods next to/in.
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This path led strait into Doomwood straight.
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I sent a ice shard at him an.
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he would have to re-learn necromancery to do it again necromancy
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and heard the first part about the 100 necromancer. necromancers.
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Dark power users, theres a difference. there's.
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necro- I mean- dark powered one to me too ones.
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and say that there was a little town a few miles away saw.
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As I walked I though, I thought about Lily, 'As I walked,'
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and the overwhelming sorrow was to much too.
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Even if I failed, as long as I tried, thats what mattered. that's.
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I stood up and stood out confidently strode off.
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(I decided to stick with necro's for a while, since I knew how they fought). Gossip led me to a old woman of the town necroes and an.
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and the one's that left a literal mark on me will be described. ones.
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After deliberating wether to do light (since it was super-effective against necromancer) whether and necromancers.
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"Necro's here, necro's there, necro's, necro's everywhere!" I said in annoyance. "Either necro's are easier to find, talked about more, or their just plain isn't any other dark-power users. necroes. There.
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I was at a inn an.
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gather much-needed info on where to find necro's necroes.
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So, you after necromancer, huh? necromancers.
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There has to be more dark users than necro's, right? necroes
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why not nap a yaga? nab.
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a actual witch mind you an.
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Do you know of any yaga's to nab? yagas.
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you a paladin of something or.
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but the yaga's in Amityville might yagas
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gave me directions to where I could find the yaga's yagas.
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Eventually I must have fell asleep fallen.
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If not hear to destroy this place here.
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It YAGA not witch. it's.
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and I thought yaga's kept tags on each other yagas and tabs.
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but we can do a locater spell locator.
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It was a Amityville special an.
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challenged each other to a eat-off of the stuff an.
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as many alive pumpkins obviously didn't like me taking their brethren live.
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I went to the well and lower myself in to retrieve some fungus lowered
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She never switches lair's no matter how much she moves around. lairs.
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I then thanked the yaga's, and turned to leave. yagas.
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I had a idea of where it would be an.
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As I slept, I dreamed, or rather nightmares 'dreamt, or rather, had nightmares'.
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Its yaga, insolent girl. it's.
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I hit her with a ice attack an
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the yaga doing fireball's fireballs.
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Bet your a wannabe hero who decide to pick on a little old fire mage you're and decided.
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Tisk, bet you can't control you powers either. Tsk.
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Well, thats one thing that we both share. that's.
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so how is my reason any better than your? yours.
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unless their was no other option. there.
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I then focused on her neckless, which I just noticed it was glowing strangely. A thought hit me like one of my thunderbolts, the neckless was her weapon, and if I could destroy it... necklace.
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I ran up and yanked the neckless over the yaga's head necklace.
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I bagged the neckless necklace.
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began the walk to Okalore to deliver the prisoner. Oaklore.
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Amityville yaga's a few days later, I found half the stew gone, and no affects on the yaga's yagas.
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yaga/necro's/darkness users I met, since most were bad. I was willing to admit to there were exceptions though. yagas/necroes/darkness users, that.
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This I learned, and other things as well. Thats why this tale is on the list, for while the yaga was not much harder than normal (though normal wasn't normal by most people's standards), learnt, that's, peoples'.
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and the lessons learned put this in the top list. learnt.
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for it mainly consist on the same moves over and over again. I find it boring to remember every.single.move and I guess its worse to hear. consists of, it's.
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The Illusionist and the Necromanceress. necromantress.
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that acts like a layer of steel, re-enforcing the staff even further reinforcing.
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devoting a least a hour a day to this. at.
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Last time I had asked rolith for a suggesting things hadn't gone so well... suggestion.
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I shuttered. But even then I kept silent. Now that I could say anything when I was on my face on the floor. shuddered, not.
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What stopping me from just beating up a bunch of little newbs what's
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I DID answer, its wrong, and besides that, the necro's are training for seppy it's, necroes, Sepulchure, because I highly doubt she'd refer to him as Seppy...
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When I reached Okalore though Oaklore.
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I pushed this though away thought.
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I told you not to go bugging the necro's necroes.
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Rolith is captured and its all your fault! your so weak it's, you're.
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And now its happening again." I moaned. "Its all my fault it's.
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The necromnceress necromantress.
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feeling the others strength other's.
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a fire ice combo that hot in rapid succession. I was fighting harder band faster than I ever had before shot, and.
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this fire into a almighty fireball an.
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Its a good thing she dodged, I doubted she could have survived that without sever burns. It's, severe.
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which were a little stronger to kill. harder.
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I finally managed to hit the necromanceress with a powerful wind attack necroantress.
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but as I wanted her conscience conscious.
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Where Rolith? Where's.
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Thats the worse lie I ever heard That's, worst.
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I knew a lier when I saw one liar.
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I don't see any of ,y teachers and they wouldn't miss it. my.
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Its just that Jaspar is a master illusionist it's.
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did he ever once hit you I think you want this the other way around.
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put prisoners their if he wasn't present, so I set the necromanceress under the tree, and the flew back to Oaklore. there, necromantress, then.
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but then I did a anti-illusion spell, which revealed everyone in there proper places an, their.
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but left out what I the horrors my mind had conjured up 'but left out the horrors'.
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the way your talking you have another necro already needed to be defeated? you're, needing.
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You know me to well. When your ready too, you're.
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After my battle with the Necromanceress necromantress.
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I said the charm wear's off after awhile wears.
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"Lily, its good to see you." "Its good to see you too little tiger. it's.
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Now come on, lets play let's.
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Its okay little tiger. it's.
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But oh, who life is cruel how.
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so I slowly crept up on, wanting for once to surprise her 'so I slowly crept up on her'.
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Somethings wrong Something's
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I mean its Doomwood for the love of God! it's.
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Because its just a dream, when I open up me I will lose you it's, my eyes.
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and my hearts about to break heart's.
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I'm hung a wish I've.
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And its my fault you can't it's.
Alright, after trudging through that wall of typos, you need to understand that I did, in fact enjoy the story. *thumbs up* If you ever want your work spell-checked, just give me a nudge. A few base pointers. 's is used as either a possessive suffix with a noun, or a conjugative suffix with verbs/pronouns. i.e it's- it is. yaga's- belongs to the yaga. 's is NEVER used as plurals.
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