A Dreamer
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Post your comments below, story is here: http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=19243051 PREVIOUS POSTS- taken down because they were in the story itself. quote:
ORIGINAL: Velmus: I liked it! Very good. And good grammar, a thing I love in stories. =P Keep writing! I see GREAT potential in this story if ya keep practicing. quote:
ORGINAL: Carly9467 LOL Mah Hotbuddeh has a girlfrend? Woot! You go girl!:D Lol nice you got detention. Canz i be in diz? :o quote:
ORIGINAL: Carly9467 Make meh get captured by ur dad too? :o Taht be awesomesauce quote:
ORIGINAL: Carly9467 xD quote:
ORIGINAL: UnityDestroyer This is very good i see more and more potential to your plots. quote:
ORIGINAL: Watzinname WAT AWOSOME story :D Meh,you won't be able to control MY dreams though. My mind and body is surrounded by a repellent kind of sheild. Poison,mind control,hypnosis,dream control,etc,doesn't have an effect on me so :P quote:
ORIGINAL: Sir Night Very good story! I like it. I also like that you're writing it to give us a good story, rather than just to tell everyone how OP and unbeatable you are. quote:
ORIGINAL: Velmur That potential I mentioned earlier? It isn't potential anymore. It's just plain GOOD WRITING! Very good story, please don't penetrate my mind, kthnxbai. quote:
ORIGINAL: Carly9467 Dude, you got mah name wrong xD It's KALI!
< Message edited by Eukara Vox -- 1/17/2012 23:57:04 >
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