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11/23/2011 22:23:28   
lordkaho
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 Chapter 12 is up!

Things took a slight turn and I had to introduce these characters sooner than expected.
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11/24/2011 4:04:35   
Mortarion
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Why? I hope it's not because you are having troubles in real life
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 277
11/24/2011 4:32:23   
Glais
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Strange, I'd seen this chapter long ago yet only read it now >_>

Anyhow, I like this chapter because it got back to...the core...or something. Things were getting a bit weird for a bit, difficult to take in.
Sir Vice...is awesome...
DF MQ  Post #: 278
11/24/2011 4:45:28   
Mortarion
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I readed the whole chapter on IPod
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 279
11/24/2011 5:29:40   
lordkaho
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quote:

I hope it's not because you are having troubles in real life


That's totally unrelated...

It's just that I'm trying speed the pace a bit.

quote:

Sir Vice...is awesome...


Oh really?

Anyway, that little side trip with Lawrence ate (literally) 3 whole chapters. Glad I didn't get lured in making her the main character.

DF MQ  Post #: 280
11/24/2011 5:42:52   
Glais
Member

Yes, yes he is. Or he will be, just you watch.

Wait, how exactly can I make predictions when you're the author...? >_>
Err yeah, well I SENSE he will be awesome, I've liked him since the first chapter anyways. I also like these new knights too, I'm wondering how the Sir Rated and Sir Berus situation will go.
DF MQ  Post #: 281
11/24/2011 6:09:47   
lordkaho
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 You'll see soon enough. Honestly, I can't talk too much about the knights as they're too tied with the plot.
DF MQ  Post #: 282
11/24/2011 12:27:57   
Helixi
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When will you be wanting this critique? Soon, or are you happy to wait a while?
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11/24/2011 12:46:46   
Varen6398
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quote:

her fault in the fist place


Should be 'her fault in the first place'. Noticed it as I was reading through.
DF  Post #: 284
11/24/2011 18:32:25   
lordkaho
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 @Helixi: Do take your time.
DF MQ  Post #: 285
11/24/2011 18:35:40   
Helixi
Member

Kaho: Thanks very much.
AQ DF  Post #: 286
11/26/2011 9:33:52   
lordkaho
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 Chapter 13 is up!

I just felt like writing today, so here it is. Jeanne and her Band of Merry Men is about to go official soon!
DF MQ  Post #: 287
11/26/2011 10:08:25   
Varen6398
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 Interesting...Sanctus Oculus?

Sanctus sounds like it is derived from the word 'Sanctum' which is a holy place, and Oculus means 'eye' I think (it did have an eye like orb in it, didn't it?). So 'Holy Eye'? Or am I putting together random dots?

< Message edited by Varen6398 -- 11/26/2011 10:12:00 >
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11/26/2011 13:17:20   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
spoiler:

Is their leader a lich of some sorts?
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11/26/2011 17:24:37   
lordkaho
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 @Varen: Yeah. It's pretty literal in a naming sense. Google translate is all sorts of fun.

@DD:
spoiler:

Not really. But he does harbor similar goals to one.


< Message edited by lordkaho -- 11/26/2011 17:29:10 >
DF MQ  Post #: 290
11/26/2011 18:56:44   
Glais
Member

Well that was interesting, I'm really liking these Knight guys. They're fairly interesting personality-wise.
Though, I can understand why they'd hate being under Jeanne's control, why would the Im-there I go again, Inquisition, even put her in command after her last complete failure?

I suspect something is unright....

spoiler:

I suspect the Grand Inquisitor's going for a coup of some sort. He DID take control of the entire Inquisition....

On another note, I find it interesting, if I keep going my way and substitute the Pactogonal Knight names with the slightly different ones here (Sir Rated/Rator, Sir Cus/Kuss, etc.) that makes the Knights of the Pactagon Inquisition members...
DF MQ  Post #: 291
11/26/2011 20:30:48   
lordkaho
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 @Glaisaurus

spoiler:

Not really. The Grand Inquisitor just has different plans for Jeanne. I mean why else must they risk manpower on an incompetent Captain?


And so the "Everybody, save Olaus, Gets To Bully Jeanne Until She Breaks Down And Cries" game continues!

Edit: Fixed some typos and grammar errors on Chapter 13.

< Message edited by lordkaho -- 11/26/2011 20:31:27 >
DF MQ  Post #: 292
11/26/2011 20:33:52   
Glais
Member

spoiler:

Well, then while I was off on the coup, it is pretty obvious he's got some weird plans. I suspect, actually I'm sure given Noir and Lawrence's knowledge, that he knows of Jeanne's "true form" so to speak. Though as to what that has to do with putting a less than fantastic commander in charge I have no idea
DF MQ  Post #: 293
11/26/2011 20:58:09   
lordkaho
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spoiler:

He is indeed aware. The whole 'Jeanne is a bad leader' is part of his grand experiment. An experiment dating back to the 1st Grand Inquisitor, Gregory Innocentius.
DF MQ  Post #: 294
11/26/2011 21:02:11   
Glais
Member

spoiler:

Weird. I also now realize, what with Innocentius now being a Dragon, that'd explain the Inquisition's tolerance for Dragons, or something.
Grand experiment? Do they want to utilize her for a weapon or like, fuse with her or something and gain whatever abilities she has?
Or better yet, Aliens.
DF MQ  Post #: 295
11/26/2011 21:10:05   
lordkaho
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 That's a secret for now.

And about Innocentius

spoiler:

The 1st Grand Inquisitor was a dragon rider. When he died, he had his soul bound into his dragon by the next Grand Inquisitor, Alaya Vistaraja, a lady soul weaver and thus making them the same entity. Though I'm surprised you got that one right.
DF MQ  Post #: 296
11/26/2011 21:20:13   
Glais
Member

spoiler:

He fused with his Dragon? Depending on the Dragon, that's a bit...mean, though if his bond with the dragon was good enough it'd make sense, but given the Inquisition's disregard for the wants of others....


And well, given the names, it was pretty obvious o_O
DF MQ  Post #: 297
11/26/2011 21:30:33   
lordkaho
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spoiler:

Worry not. Gregory was on very good terms with his Dragon, that it humbly complied to have its 'master' live inside it. Also, it was only during Markus Honorius' rule that the Inquisition got all crazy and extremist in nature. During Innocentius' rule, the Inquisitors were just a really devoted form of secret service for the King. Jeanne's laments in chapter 5 echoes the time when Honorius was newly appointed as the GI. At the moment, you could say the Inquisition is undergoing decay.


< Message edited by lordkaho -- 11/26/2011 21:34:00 >
DF MQ  Post #: 298
11/26/2011 21:34:12   
Mortarion
Member

Hey me got question, the Sanctus Oculus, cool name by the way, are htey human, could you ever drawn one?
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 299
11/26/2011 21:36:33   
lordkaho
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 As seen in the description in Chapter 13, they are definitely NOT human. They are gaseous creatures that blend in with light.
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