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1/11/2012 19:33:23   
Kinzdor
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The story is here
Discuss The Death Games.

< Message edited by kinzvlle -- 1/12/2012 16:18:32 >
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1/11/2012 20:14:33   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


 The link isn't working.
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1/11/2012 20:34:56   
Goldstein
Member

I like my introduction. Make sure you listen to the accompanying song!
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1/11/2012 21:17:05   
Kinzdor
Member

Fixed the link. Nice intro Goldstein,though was not excepting you to introduce a new character.
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1/11/2012 21:25:31   
Goldstein
Member

What? I did WHAT?
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1/11/2012 21:42:51   
Vector
Member
 

 i think what he means by broken link is that it's not clickable.
oh, and maybe he tried to change strebor up a bit too, if i'm not mistaken
Post #: 6
1/11/2012 21:55:30   
Goldstein
Member

No, Segreto Donalle is a new character I'm using for stories independent from Strebor's.
Post #: 7
1/11/2012 22:07:56   
Vector
Member
 

 that i didn't know. care to tell his alignment in case he ends up interacting with my competitor later?
Post #: 8
1/11/2012 22:15:04   
Goldstein
Member

He works with the Illuminati, so naturally...

He's very polite, but stiff, and totally devoted to the task at hand. Likes to avoid conversations. Doesn't like the fact that the Illuminati gets such a bad rap.
Post #: 9
1/11/2012 22:30:50   
Vector
Member
 

 then you better keep him away from my competitor as much as possible, unless he wants to risk... shall we say, utter failure.
is my assumption that the illuminati being unspeakably evil correct?
Post #: 10
1/11/2012 22:36:45   
Goldstein
Member

You've never heard of the Illuminati? Google them!
Post #: 11
1/11/2012 22:39:45   
Vector
Member
 

 i've heard of them and i just want to be absolutely sure we're on the same page here. different opinions, and all... >.>
but don't expect me to change mine
Post #: 12
1/11/2012 22:42:05   
Goldstein
Member

The Bavarian Illuminati started out as a group of scientist fighting for reason. I'd like to think the modern Illuminati is like that, not the perverted form the conspiracy theorists have made it today.
Post #: 13
1/11/2012 23:03:09   
Vector
Member
 

 i'm afraid that doesn't exactly answer my question. do we think the same thing, or are our opinions opposing each other?
Post #: 14
1/11/2012 23:09:26   
Goldstein
Member

I support the Illuminati. I don't think they're evil. Does that answer your question, or am I blind or something?
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1/11/2012 23:13:46   
Vector
Member
 

 crystal clear now, goldstein. my warning remains, however
Post #: 16
1/11/2012 23:15:11   
Goldstein
Member

D=
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1/11/2012 23:21:42   
Vector
Member
 

 it's only because everyone seems to hate him, nothing personal. i don't want to risk an incident outside the competition... or during, for that matter
Post #: 18
1/12/2012 4:17:42   
megakyle777
Member

Hi there, just wanted to give some critisism on the stories of the Ommicorp Death Games from what I has seen so far. I will make it short.

Kinz, the prolouge is good, but I think it needs to be run through a spell checker for puntuation and spelling purposes. The tale it tells is good though and quite interesting. My only complaint is that the reveal of Clown to the audience may be a little too early, but I will wait and see what others think on that. It also may be a little short, but since it's a prolouge that's fine and it serves it's purpose.

Also, link is broken here.

Goldstien, I liked your tale and it adds some intrigue to the games already. Good job. I wonder how far this imposter will go...
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1/12/2012 15:28:56   
Vector
Member
 

 alrighty i posted my intro to this, so... i half expect to change a few things, but for now i'll just leave it as it is so you can read what i have so far
Post #: 20
1/12/2012 16:27:13   
Kinzdor
Member

OK I fixed the prologue.
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1/12/2012 16:46:01   
star screamer
Member

I should be posting the part where you hire me soon
It was through letter. :)
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1/12/2012 20:39:28   
Kinzdor
Member

Nice Star,hmm the riddle sheet intriguing.
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1/12/2012 21:20:39   
star screamer
Member

The riddle sheet thing was just a little joke, it really has nothing but riddles on it.

~Look out for colours, Trivial
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1/12/2012 21:33:08   
Kinzdor
Member

Well I was rather to author,that`s why I called you Star.
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