Drakkoniss
Creative! Constructive!
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I recommend having your character's chassis ripped apart, leaving only a mangled head, Vector. That way, he can survive to be recreated/revived in a new body!... Possibly more powerful than ever. O.o Well, I think I'll read this story an new one about now. ACK!!! TEXT WALL OF DOOM!!!!!!!!! *plays to the tune of Beethoven's fifth* TEN MILLION FAAAME... TEN MIL-LION FAAAAAAME; Ten million fame, ten million fame, ten million fame! And with that nonsense in order, and with me hopefully having not made a stupid mistake, back to the Dealer. And the "...and asks for an unbrekable sword" bit compared with the villainous one makes the heroes seemmore simple minded, and less inventive. -.- Blackshock is assisting Trivial?!?! Why haven't I heard of this? Has this not been said on the Char Discussion page at all? HEY! YOU TOOK CLOWN OF THE PROLOGUE!!! WOOT!!!!!!!! Hmm... Can't concentrate enough to comment on the entirety of it, so I think I'll read Experimental and Zafara's posts right now. Hmm.. message while trying to hide. Odd. Makes him seem nigh omniscient, almost, if you don't take into account the resources the Dealer has. Yep, great strategy. What one might expect when you want competitors... and ones in specific you know you can make come. Oh, you'd know if everyone were out for your head. You'd know because I'd find you wherever you were, and would hunt you untill you fail to escape my clutches or have been disabled. *semi-mischieviously smiles as if that weren't threatening at all* *sips from a cup of tea, and then motions with it while saying, "Besides, there's no reason we can't be civilized, is there? I mean, you've given me no real reason to wish to harm you, regardless."* Well, that's a relatively silly simplistic conversation. At least you found someone to be nice to you. Oh, the silly emotional people of the world... Mmm... calling someone a human is the equivalent of racism to some people. Nice to see that you are trying to get yourself out of the hate-filled mess you call your life. *whisltes the Super Mario Bros. theme song, and then checks in-game, and returns* She's right. It's hard to be empathetic with something that has yet to have emotions whatsoever. "The rumors were true" is an odd thing to say when his entire existance and reputation is founded on the fact that he's supposedly a half-man half-machine monster. XP Seems that you will actually canonically have some sort of relationship with Demolicious, probably spurred on by similar situations about predudice and the way people act towards you, though I can't say if it will be necessarily romantic, yet... Melancholic emotions making you snappy? Hmm... I wonder how things shall work out between you, and what shall happen if she sees you all mangled from the competition... Understandable, considering the eyes that it would be relatively easily found out, especially compounded with the knowledge of the situation with her father narrowing things down, among yet more clues. *chuckles at the surge protector thing* Might read Goldstein's bit later, too, as I have interests about the Illuminati's part in things, but not just now, I think. ... Well, I read Trivial's part, because it was short, and it cought my eye. Makes me think he might be a weee bit arrogant. ... Hmm... not red. I wonder about the dramatic entrance, and what circumstances caused her to act in such a way. Rather rude, it would seem, not knowing the details. I'm going to ignore the nudity, for the most part, as it is understandable for a lycanthrope, though it still makes me wonder as to why she did it, and the broken window leaves her rather exposed, especially if anyone paused to look up at some lycanthrope scaling a building, for some reason. *chuckles at the digression on her naked beauty* On a more serious note, while I understand those were her thoughts, and initial thoughts, especially stray ones, do not have to be accurate, but it still seems odd to me that Zafara would think of her as a werewolf, then, as apposed to mentally using the correct term, and I thought I might say something to that effect. Nice to have mention of her voice, by the way. That adds a layer of depth to the character that will be important to note later. Didn't enchant me into thinking she was the girl of my dreams, but I tend to look past such things, so meh. Hmm... I understand what she means, with the promise, and the effect of being drawn into such a tournament. Obviously, I am somewhat worried, but why shouldn't I be, to some extent? I understand her level of skill and power, though, so I am less worried than I might be. lol Might read some of the other posts on there... I think I'll check other parts of the forums, first.
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