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4/6/2012 1:16:15   
VanHellsin24
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 No. Hes not from the future. He time travels frequently
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 76
4/6/2012 1:17:32   
Glais
Member

My mistake, I misunderstood. Eh, I just hate DF people having jeans. Personal quirk.
DF MQ  Post #: 77
4/6/2012 1:19:55   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Cant think of better pants wear
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 78
4/6/2012 1:23:45   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Also, its not that he has energy magic, its that he cant use it accordingly and properly
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 79
4/6/2012 1:29:35   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 One thing:

Can you get more people to read this. I know u must be annoyed...
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 80
4/6/2012 1:32:25   
Glais
Member

Oh no, it's not a Problem he has jeans, just something I personally dislike. It has no bearing on the story at all.

As for getting readers, I'm not really sure exactly how one would. All of mine were forumers I'd already built prior connections with. So I suppose my only suggestion would be to build connections with people?

It doesn't bother me though, the amount of people reading a story doesn't affect me reading it. I try to read most stories around here just to help the authors out best I can.
DF MQ  Post #: 81
4/6/2012 2:55:16   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 First backstory up
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 82
4/6/2012 3:25:56   
Glais
Member

If he's referring to Jaania...? How, Alexander didn't meet Warlic until RIGHT before he met Jaania so...?

Also, is Crow just really old or did his masters decide to send him back so long to train?
DF MQ  Post #: 83
4/6/2012 8:06:58   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Yea, Crow is referring to Jaania

Its half. Celestial Slayers don't age as fast. A decade for a human is half a year to a Celestial Slayer in terms of aging
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 84
4/6/2012 8:18:01   
Glais
Member

Well then that's a bit of a continuity error.

And well, it's been around 200 hears since then apparently so...?
DF MQ  Post #: 85
4/6/2012 8:20:32   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 He'll see humans die out if he lives his entire lifespan
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 86
4/6/2012 18:47:36   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Chapter 7 is up. I feel proud about this one, honestly.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 87
4/6/2012 19:02:15   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Might continue the second backstory next....not so sure...
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 88
4/6/2012 19:30:57   
Glais
Member

Hm, can't help but feel Crow's grown a bit into a "typical main character" type.
DF MQ  Post #: 89
4/6/2012 19:31:55   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Why do you surmise so ?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 90
4/6/2012 19:36:58   
Glais
Member

He reminds me a lot of generic shonen protagonists. Angered really easy, incredibly powerful, etc.
DF MQ  Post #: 91
4/6/2012 21:44:55   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Hes only angered by the mention of his father...incredibly powerful..,only so much
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 92
4/6/2012 21:47:55   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Believe me I detest those type of characters
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 93
4/7/2012 5:30:51   
Glais
Member

Well that's good to know, he's just coming off to me as one of those at the moment. I understand the dad thing being a "berserk button" of sorts.
DF MQ  Post #: 94
4/7/2012 8:54:53   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Remember the beginning of the proluge
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 95
4/7/2012 14:58:54   
Glais
Member

If I had to go by JUST the prologue, I'd feel even more inclined to my opinion. First impressions and all.
DF MQ  Post #: 96
4/7/2012 15:36:01   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 It shows foreshadowing
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 97
4/7/2012 15:41:59   
Glais
Member

True I hadn't picked up on that actually.
DF MQ  Post #: 98
4/7/2012 15:47:14   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Lol it pays to know my english

I graduated high school with a Gpa of 104%
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 99
4/12/2012 11:21:07   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Today I plan on pushing 5 long chapters out. These will focus on the much needed development of a few characters plus the introduction of 3 new characters. Stay tuned!
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 100
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