Drakkoniss
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... Ravens are a type of crow. ._.
Tried to use Amaterasu on the computer again, Eclipse? I'm guessing Clown's "transition story chapter" will help with tying it all together, btw.
@Clown: I still might post one. Jessa's probably not going to be able to, this time around, but still... My commenting could be better. :/ Too little insightfulness, in many cases. I am a perfectionist, but whatever...
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Interesting. I wonder what that side project would happen to be... or the other ones.
I like how you protray his entry. Very nice, to a point where it seems beautiful, though somewhat exagerated.
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Unfortunately, I had my back to the door and had a pair of ear-buds in and did not notice the knight at all. I was far too absorbed in his work.
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I assume you meant this work.
Hmm... Extremely accelerated cloning? Interesting... however, limited, as the life span of the person would be less, and they would not have an adult mentality. The possible medical research benefits, though...
HALBERD!!!!!!! :D
Just from the first few dialogue pieces, I can tell that you showed the knight spectacularly well. He seems human, and not some rage-filled monster, who will jump into combat at the slightest things, and with spectacular zeal (though I can understand why they might). In other words, he seems somewhat reasonable, though I question whether he/they would be rid of their allies, after the potential conquest of Super City comes to its end.
Torquemada? O.o That name DOES ring bells...
Survey says he was a leader in the Spanish Inquisition.
That would explain why I remembered him how I did, and that he was evil in my memory.
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"I am no one. I am everyone. Does it matter?"
A rather... strategic answer... And yes, yes it does.
What, is knighthood really THAT touchy of a subject? XD
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Most of your studies are. That's why they've caught the attention of the Brotherhood of Order."
That makes me smile. :) (Idk why; Just brings a smile to my face; Maybe nostalgia)
I am very much enjoying your chapter, Goldstein. Possibly more than Clown's first one.
CURSE YOU, KNIGHTS TEMPLAR!!!!!!!!!!!!! (THE CONSPIRACY THEORISTS WERE RIGHT!!!!!!!!!)
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I knitted my brow, and slowly lowered my halberd. "I say...I'd like to maybe hear a bit more."
So would I... The problem is that the Brotherhood does not understand the big picture. Super City could potentially be of much more value to the world than its destruction would be, especially with the other threats that are posed to the Earth, and her citizens.
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"What of the heroes, Sir?" I asked, completely putting away my weapon.
"Gone. They are no less guilty than the serial killers and rapists lose in this city."
Hypocritical monsters. They would be just as guilty, if not worse. They claim to care about justice and the well-being of others... They would be OBBLITERATING the finest scientific minds in the business, and the potential for such improvements in the future! Innocent women and children!!! They bemoan the loss inflicted by said people, but they presume authority and righteousness in doing far worse. What's more, they will gain numerous countries as their enemies, and that would not be something they would tollerate, leading to even more military slaughter, and the death of scores more innocents, both of the soldiers ranks, those who have no choice in what they may do, and in the civilian populace. *clenches his fist* They call the heroes of the city DEMONS and MONSTERS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? *a second, darker, voice layers over the normal one, and rage-fires surround him* THEY SHALL BURN IN HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
... Allowing everyone to obtain such an armor would both be impractical and devestating, as well. Profound over-optimism is what that crock is.
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"I won't be saving the Clown from death, if that's what you'r implying."
How does he know that they have him? (I'm guessing he didn't)
You had better be trying to manipulate them, Strebor, or you shall find youself in a very painful situation... *bares his teeth, and snarls*
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"Nonetheless you have insulted our order and you will be punished. I demand that my strongest knight duel you to the death so this can be rectified!"
The point... stands.
Curse him, and all of his kind... I feel his sins must be... rectified.
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"My armour shall protect me from the mightiest of strikes.
That prophesy shall fail him, by the time his hour is at hand.
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"But boss, you can't get past their armour! We have no way of beating them! HE WILL KILL YOU!"
Ah, naïveté at its most ammusing. Where he works, he should really have expected more...
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And now, on to the part I am most curious about...
O.o She forgot to make her first line red... Or did she? *raises his eyebrow*
As of yet, I am deeply disturbed by the scene. (just as they dimmed the lights)
I question whether she was mistaken, as to whether it actually was an angel... Or if it was, specifically who... or for whom, perhaps?
I think I will post this, now.
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I've been reading comments...
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And i don't see an ything wrong with female Knights, except possibly that there were no female knights in old times.
CURSE YOU, JEANNE D'ARC-RELATED HISTORICAL FALACY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or whatever. Meh. I suppose you don't have to count her as a knight, anyway.
Also, I noticed that there were relatively few comments on Zafara's chapter...
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