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4/2/2012 19:25:55   
Jessa K
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 Exactly. A story needs at least a basic plot to follow, or it will mess up the entire story.

< Message edited by Jessa K -- 4/2/2012 19:26:34 >
AQW  Post #: 176
4/2/2012 20:17:42   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


 I have a question? When did the fact that Zafara only had one angel-esque wing get stated? So far as I know, only one wing was confirmed (she did this in commentary, even though in the chapter there was room for interperatation), but nothing was said to indicate that she didn't have another on the other side, in her chapter...

I can't believe the chapter number has boosted so much in such a short time... I'm maybe halfway through it, and I haven't even taken that long of a time not reading it... <.<

< Message edited by Drakkoniss -- 4/2/2012 20:18:43 >
DF  Post #: 177
4/4/2012 16:09:52   
PallyKnight
Member

Just wrote a chapter! Let me know what you think!

< Message edited by PallyKnight -- 4/4/2012 17:04:32 >
DF AQW  Post #: 178
4/4/2012 17:26:34   
Doom Desirer
Member

Nice chapter. I like how you said something about the voidrix blood in your chapter. To be honest, I never expected that alliance, thought it is understandable.
Post #: 179
4/4/2012 20:36:26   
PallyKnight
Member

Thanks. Pure Darkness is actually a very neutral ability. It can be aligned with anyone.
DF AQW  Post #: 180
4/6/2012 6:28:51   
Zeuzt
Member

Hey guys

I've been reading your chapters and I know there should be like a story or something

Like we know they want to destroy and stuff but I don't know there's no plot just attacks and more recruits just saying

Post #: 181
4/6/2012 12:31:32   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Zuest: There is a plot. This is only the beginning.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 182
4/6/2012 12:55:12   
PallyKnight
Member

quote:

Zuest: There is a plot. This is only the beginning.


It's just that, most stories don't take 30 chapters to get a plot in.
DF AQW  Post #: 183
4/6/2012 13:20:58   
Shadowlord9k
Member

OC: and most collaborations don't have people go and write their own chapters on a whim.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 184
4/6/2012 13:25:12   
PallyKnight
Member

quote:

OC: and most collaborations don't have people go and write their own chapters on a whim.


Maybe we should have a rule so that people can't do that.

< Message edited by PallyKnight -- 4/6/2012 13:26:26 >
DF AQW  Post #: 185
4/6/2012 13:41:39   
Jessa K
Member
 

 Or at least establish what's going to happen next. This doesn't seem to be a collab; it's more like a free-for-all.

< Message edited by Jessa K -- 4/6/2012 13:42:01 >
AQW  Post #: 186
4/6/2012 14:05:20   
Shadowlord9k
Member

We need actual communication between the writers, so we can get more done in less time.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 187
4/6/2012 14:44:31   
delta blitz
Member

Hmm...interesting *places his left fist under his chin to represent his signiture thinking position* I agree with shadow you guys need some organization or rather get eachother emails(thats what clown and grey did when they were making C and T) so that you guys can send ideas between eachother (or send it to clown). I believe that will help completely close any gaps in the story.
AQ AQW Epic  Post #: 188
4/6/2012 15:04:54   
PallyKnight
Member

Here, I made a Xat Chat Room so we can discuss things about this collab and other collaborations afterwards.
DF AQW  Post #: 189
4/6/2012 15:09:23   
Jessa K
Member
 

 O_o Did anybody else see that? David just agreed with Shadow!
And good idea, guys.

< Message edited by Jessa K -- 4/6/2012 15:10:06 >
AQW  Post #: 190
4/6/2012 15:12:02   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Jessa: He did something smart for once. I dislike the sharing E-mails idea, and the chatroom relies on us all being there at once.
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 191
4/6/2012 15:15:06   
PallyKnight
Member

quote:

I dislike the sharing E-mails idea, and the chatroom relies on us all being there at once.


Then what else? I made that chatroom for no reason then.
DF AQW  Post #: 192
4/6/2012 15:18:30   
Jessa K
Member
 

 What about pm's? Or even this topic, using spoiler tags.
AQW  Post #: 193
4/6/2012 15:19:17   
PallyKnight
Member

PM's work.
DF AQW  Post #: 194
4/6/2012 17:01:44   
Clown the Jester
Member

Don't worry guys I'll be moving the plot forward by tomorrow...just finishing the chapter...soon we'll have the real show on the road....now that we're all ready, I declare Opening part done...next comes the complication and climax....and then....


La Fin...and all will be at an end.


HOO HOO HOO HOO HOO HA HA HA!
AQW Epic  Post #: 195
4/6/2012 17:15:21   
Jessa K
Member
 

 Wow, 30 pages just for the opening... That's got to be a new record. Looking forward to the new chapter. Still, a plot needs to be established. I think so far it's like this...

•Smashers all over the city are captured by the Order.
•The Order tries to destroy/kill the city.

That's not really much.
AQW  Post #: 196
4/6/2012 19:48:31   
PallyKnight
Member

quote:

•Smashers all over the city are captured by the Order.
•The Order tries to destroy/kill the city.


Overcast also joins the Brotherhood, but my character isn't important enough I guess...not to sound whiny...

< Message edited by PallyKnight -- 4/6/2012 19:51:09 >
DF AQW  Post #: 197
4/6/2012 22:13:47   
Jessa K
Member
 

 *Captured/join

Still not much of a plot...
AQW  Post #: 198
4/7/2012 2:10:22   
Shadowlord9k
Member

Clown: Good to hear, I'm looking forward to it.
Jessa: Technically entire books can be "the opening".
AQ DF AQW Epic  Post #: 199
4/9/2012 10:54:29   
Kinzdor
Member

Looks like Clown is late with the new chap. Though that`s ok his chaps are worth the wait.
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