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4/25/2013 22:37:24   
daichi
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dropped off an angel, reviews would be sweet. (but please be gentle)

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=21247295

@below thanks for the review! upon closer inspection I did realize the quotes needed work.

So I fixed most of them, except for " you thought to kill one of the host of heaven? "

because he is based of of the Hebrew concept of an angel and they're almost always referred to in group as "the heavenly host".

And I did try to stick to that Hebrew/Islamic view of angels which at times is quite mysterious. human-like but not quite.

< Message edited by daichi -- 4/26/2013 13:46:29 >
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4/26/2013 10:07:28   
ValkyrieKnight
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@ Daichi

Sorry to say but he looks more like an Angel Of Death than anything else, not exactly the grim reaper but pretty close. His quotes don't fair too well either

respect you elders child!

This wouldn't work if you were fighting against an older opponent, for arguments sake Father Time.

I sense evil in your heart.

Implying that every character E.G Paladin is evil.

you thought to kill one of the host of heaven? ha.

Host? Not sure what you mean by "Host of heaven"

This could be seen as nicpicking but it would help if you worded the quotes so that it would work regardless of who he's fighting.

You didn't post what kind of card set he would have so I can't review further. You shouldn't worry about making the best drawing, you can very clearly make out how you envisioned his appearance to be like so that's well done.



Edit: Just posted my 2nd character suggestion, I hope you guys like it ~
Forest Alchemist

< Message edited by ValkyrieKnight -- 4/27/2013 14:50:22 >
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4/28/2013 20:18:05   
ChaosRipjaw
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Jun15


 New character I made: Zorkine. I didn't come up with the name.
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4/30/2013 6:17:48   
Finncollier
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I have created a new fiend, Olomon

EDIT: Lightning not lighting! you silly boy/girl

EDIT: Alamek and Olomon, Brothers in crime.

< Message edited by Finncollier -- 4/30/2013 8:54:13 >
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4/30/2013 10:39:14   
Mondez
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I made my fan based suggestion on Nightbane and added the basic boss HP and cards. If Nightbane aka Balius could get into the world of Oversoul, I'm thinking of having him as an epic boss fight with higher level HP would deal Nightbane a challenge.
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5/1/2013 13:22:41   
megakyle777
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Because I played some Far Cry 3 Blood Dragon and think it cool, and because AQW is unleashing a Blood Titan Class soon, here's a Dragon with Blood based powers: http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=21256725
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5/1/2013 13:24:57   
Bunker
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Dddddddaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnngggggggggggg.

I love it, the idea is great. It's exactly what I want in a character :D
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5/1/2013 16:56:05   
Beck
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Got to admit, feeling less and less enthusiastic about every Legendary and Chaos character that gets suggested. If you have a good story and/or art, then you don't need to be Legendary-ranked for us to see how awesome your idea is...
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5/1/2013 17:00:22   
Mondez
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Just wondering, what did you guys think about my Nightbane idea?

@below Rascal
Woot!

< Message edited by Mondez -- 5/1/2013 17:03:41 >
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5/1/2013 17:02:54   
Char
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@Mondez: It blew my bow off. 'Nuff said. :D
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5/1/2013 18:56:33   
ValkyrieKnight
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@ Buggy Beck

I'd review more suggestions if so many of them didn't sound so overpowered, ain't nobody got time for more game breaking characters.

@ Mondez

I couldn't be sure weather that was an already made Artix character or did you make that yourself, but onto the review.

Story : Kinda bland, nothing really interesting.

Price : Just do people a favor and just make it SG, only SG players with lots of Lifetimes are ever going to be able to get that.

Card Deck : Heavily Overpowered, even above Headless Horseman, nobody got time for that.

< Message edited by ValkyrieKnight -- 5/1/2013 18:57:08 >
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5/1/2013 19:11:22   
UnderSoul
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Abyssal Fiend is ready! A touch of Lovecraft, a hint of Nietzsche, and of couse some stuff that couldn't come from anywhere else but my tormented brilliant mind. The Old One was so popular among forumites, I decided to try my hand at a different kind of Water Legendary, less Flying Spaghetti Monster and more fiendish abomination.
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5/1/2013 19:26:06   
Mondez
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@ValkyrieKnight
Interesting insight and I will answer the criticism that you have inputted:

Story: It is a bit bland and of course it's one of those basic "go find and slay this guy" kind of quest.

Price: SG price I would suggest, but the reason why the price is so high is because he is Nightbane, one of the most strongest Dragowerepyre in AQ Lore. If you take the time to delve into his story and watch one of the boss fights on Youtube, he is just an insane powerhouse.

Cards: It is not overpowered because I took balance into account and you can see he is literally defenseless because Nightbane wasn't known as much of a defender, but a relentless attacker so the only weakness to his starter deck is the lack of shields and high energy costs.

3 Piercing in math terms would cost 6 Fire energy if 1 Pierce costs 2.

Nightbane was already made in AQ Classic and the picture was from AQ Classic battle.

Thanks for the insight though.

< Message edited by Mondez -- 5/1/2013 19:32:49 >
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5/1/2013 19:35:40   
UnderSoul
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@Mondez I would love to see Nightbane in OS, he is truly a callback to the classic AQ. Also, what do you think of the Abyssal Fiend.
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5/1/2013 19:35:56   
ValkyrieKnight
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@ Mondez

He is defenseless, sure, but then so is FireWitch and Headless Horseman and they drop characters like flies, this guy will basically KO anyone who cannot put up counters / iron hides quick enough, even defense based characters are at a disadvantage, he'll KO you before you can even set up a strategy.

I'd rather just pay 10 ~ 12 SG then have to grind up 200k gold for a character, it's bad enough that sword is 150k.


< Message edited by ValkyrieKnight -- 5/1/2013 19:36:46 >
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5/1/2013 19:41:00   
UnderSoul
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@Valkyrie You'd be suprised how much gold some people have just laying around.
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5/1/2013 19:42:24   
ValkyrieKnight
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@ UnderSoul, yeah, the only person who could afford such characters are players with a bunch of lifetimes stacked up, I don't think many people just have a 400k or so on their accounts.

I'd like to personally, if I really wanted a character, like my WitchBlade, Lance Knight, Katana, Earth Wizard etc, then I'd buy SG, purchase the character and be done with it. Since I like to train many different characters and not level characters to 20 its difficult for me to obtain gold. And I'm a power grinder.

< Message edited by ValkyrieKnight -- 5/1/2013 19:43:54 >
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5/1/2013 19:43:41   
Mondez
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@Valkyrie Knight
I'll review over his starter deck and see what changes I can make, but since CC is coming out; I will test out it's efficiency to see if what you state about him being OP is true. Thank you for your insights on this matter.

@Undersoul
Interesting storyline though I would say try to limit his goal because a creature that has been affected by Nulgath's influence would want to serve him instead of trying to gain dominion over the influences. Taking point from the story, I can say having him to try to rule the oceans is pretty generic in terms of the RPG world, but it's a good suggestion though by taking from AQ Lore we have a huge amount of factions already in the sea for control.

It was kinda hard to piece some of the description together since it stated something about a warrior trying to evade the influence then shifts to the fiend so I was confused on the development.


*Edit @below
No problems, I always welcome criticism and please continue to not sugar coat things because no improvement comes from sugar coating. I can always take the insights to help me improve the things I write.

< Message edited by Mondez -- 5/1/2013 19:49:35 >
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5/1/2013 19:45:27   
ValkyrieKnight
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@ Mondez, no harm to you Mondez, I was just given a review without sugar coating. As I said I wasn't sure if he already existed so you can excuse what I said about the story.
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5/1/2013 19:49:18   
UnderSoul
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@Mondez Something affected by Nulgath's direct influence no doubt would serve him, but if you read carefully, Nulgath corrupted the realm itself which then led to his corruption and transformation. Kind of like a "You punched my brother, who punched me, so I'll punch you" thing, but a bit more complicated. As for the warrior-to-fiend thing, it is based on the idea that a simple thing could become a massive monstrosity if corrupted by a powerful enough influence. He wanted to fight a monster, and in doing so became a monster itself. And he doesn't want to rule the oceans, he wants the oceans to rule. Similar concept though. Hope this clears some things up!
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5/1/2013 19:53:40   
Mondez
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@Undersoul
Okay now that makes sense because your story shifts kinda fast so the small details were obscured by the large development. As an advice from a friend and fellow writer, I suggest to build up the story with small details instead of trying to go big. I always give this advice to my business partner in game design when I review his storyboard during our meetings for our upcoming game.
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5/1/2013 19:57:08   
UnderSoul
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@Mondez I will try, but my writing style has always been... unique. Thanks for the advice!
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5/2/2013 4:37:59   
Blackshock
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Felt like the bats needed an evo, so I made a concept for the veteran evo of frost bat. Whucha guys think of my blizzard bat?
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5/2/2013 4:52:10   
Megadragonknight
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@Blackshock
Not bad. Why not draw a combination of bat and dinosaur? That would be epic!
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5/2/2013 9:22:42   
Blackshock
Member

well I finally made a master form. Whucha think of Winterwing?
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