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5/23/2013 14:20:42   
Elryn

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=AQ= Golems at Granemor War Stories and Poems

This is where you may discuss of each other's war stories and poems if not on the war thread itself in the AQ General Discussion forum.
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5/30/2013 17:14:33   
hict98
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@Disc Lorde I am happy to see someone actually writing a war story. You've got interest so far and I do hope you write more to finish the story.
@Popin I like how the story starts out so far. Let's see if you can continue on with it. Also don't worry about having too many adjectives. It gives the reader a better visaul and makes them feel more engrossed in the world you have created. It also helps a lot to show the vision that you had. This makes it easier on the reader so they won't have to make their own vision for what you have.
@Klimg I love the story. I haven't read one like this yet, it is nice to have something new. I love how it is like a journal entry, the narration is great. At first it was so interesting until I got to that last paragraph, then I really got interested. I hope to see some more.


< Message edited by hict98 -- 5/30/2013 18:31:39 >
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5/31/2013 1:08:58   
Disc Lorde
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@Hict: Thanks! I definitely plan to add to it once the ending cutscene is released.

Edit: Final part added. Happy reading!

< Message edited by Disc Lorde -- 6/11/2013 0:25:27 >
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