Luster Bladewarrior
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@Gaskal: Note the line right after: "All the above abilites have an SP cost, and take a turn for activation" Hm, read Galantoh's Temporal Madness Part 1 and found few things to comment on: I think one should use different villain for undead if needed - evil Artix, both fire/dark version and one who uses undead was done already twice, and with recent events there are so much more suitable villains, such as Kabroz's zombie armies, Grimveld's father's backstrike against Brilhado, even general Necromancers unhappy with Kaley's policies. If there is need for evil Artix, that can be done without changing timeline or making him a necromancer - the events around EoE do provide some potential for character changes. Perhaps Cyrus could be similarly replaced by the Xerxes, but in truth more interesting would be if battleon was dark enough for his response to be reasonable. This is where Galanoth going back in time to start dragonslayer exterminatus makes sense. I am not so sure that Galian makes an approriate god for this, either - he is the most world-destructive god after all, while others found less issue standing against him. Even with having Hope, his soft spots are other gods' hardest spots "I'll allow you to live for now.". Leaving that aside, there are several times the story feels intentionally disjointed, catched conversations. That might not be the best move with player character. In any case, for MC reward quest it is a bit too short at mere 12 battles. The Chosen's passing comment does provide an opportunity for another 6, though even with that I think the gears' triggers should be class-locked. (Oh yeah and the misc needs to be nerfed - even borrowing additinal points from melee output won't let it reach this point.) The armor reward, well...I feel it doesn't fit the quest even if the idea is interesting and needed with lack of end-game skill-using dark armors. Why is a darkness paladin in an undead war? Also, light variant of it would be better for killing undead with the skill :V I do like the simplicity of layout there. On other notes: I have a feeling something like this involving timelines has been done before....In any case, it would be best if there are good and different notes to go with bad - such as, say, Galanoth fighting against the fix for it would mean losing his brother Demento once more. After all, armies have been defeated a lot of times before, but his brother stays dead forever.
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