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7/7/2011 19:56:14   
A Dreamer
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Post your comments below, story is here: http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=19243051

PREVIOUS POSTS- taken down because they were in the story itself.

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ORIGINAL: Velmus:
I liked it! Very good. And good grammar, a thing I love in stories. =P Keep writing! I see GREAT potential in this story if ya keep practicing.


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ORGINAL: Carly9467
LOL Mah Hotbuddeh has a girlfrend? Woot! You go girl!:D

Lol nice you got detention.

Canz i be in diz? :o


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ORIGINAL: Carly9467
Make meh get captured by ur dad too? :o
Taht be awesomesauce


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ORIGINAL: Carly9467
xD


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ORIGINAL: UnityDestroyer
This is very good i see more and more potential to your plots.



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ORIGINAL: Watzinname WAT
AWOSOME story :D
Meh,you won't be able to control MY dreams though.
My mind and body is surrounded by a repellent kind of sheild.
Poison,mind control,hypnosis,dream control,etc,doesn't have an effect on me so :P


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ORIGINAL: Sir Night
Very good story! I like it. I also like that you're writing it to give us a good story, rather than just to tell everyone how OP and unbeatable you are.


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ORIGINAL: Velmur
That potential I mentioned earlier?

It isn't potential anymore. It's just plain GOOD WRITING!

Very good story, please don't penetrate my mind, kthnxbai.



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ORIGINAL: Carly9467
Dude, you got mah name wrong xD It's KALI!


< Message edited by Eukara Vox -- 1/17/2012 23:57:04 >
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7/7/2011 23:00:41   
Carly9467
Member

She was in my underwear? e.o...hopefully had a shirt on..
and Yeah, i would badger you fer cake :)
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7/7/2011 23:02:13   
A Dreamer
Member

whatever you wear to sleep you were wearing X3
feel bettar?
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7/7/2011 23:05:31   
Carly9467
Member

Those shorts that go above your knees and a baggy t-shirt :3
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7/7/2011 23:08:46   
A Dreamer
Member

okay XD it feels awkward with u telling we what you're wearing to bed O_o
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7/7/2011 23:10:17   
Carly9467
Member

yeah...at least not in mah underwear tho xD
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7/7/2011 23:12:32   
A Dreamer
Member

lolz, yah XD that'd have extra awkward X3 its like ordering a salad dinner at a resturant, and getting a side salad, except with awkward. i feel like I'm over-explaining XD
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7/7/2011 23:14:18   
Carly9467
Member

xD I don't eat salad at pizza places...Just Pizza n Breadsticks...Sometimes wings..Mmmmm>:D
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7/7/2011 23:15:50   
A Dreamer
Member

lolz, i was talking about regular resturants, but it applies there too, and i dun like wings ;o but i loves breadsticks
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7/7/2011 23:18:17   
Carly9467
Member

YOUR MAD WOMAN :O

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DUN LIKE WINGS:OOOO

Lol i don't get salad...anywhere unless theres really nothing else i like...which isn't usual >:3
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7/8/2011 0:28:36   
A Dreamer
Member

i dunt eat wings, i a veggie train, remember?
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7/8/2011 0:33:20   
Carly9467
Member

Lol i could NOT handle bein a veggi xD I LOVE my Steak/Chicken/Ribs >:3
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7/8/2011 0:39:35   
A Dreamer
Member

Lolz,its not as hard as people think :P
but then, i never really liked the taste too much, either, so it's different for me.
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7/8/2011 0:43:00   
Carly9467
Member

xD I live off of meat xD i don't like veggies at all. The only good things i like are: bananas, Blackberries, Strawberries, Watermelon, Corn, Grapes, Grapejuice, Water(NOT TAP WATER x3), Milk (i dont like it that much but it's better than most things) Ice, cereal (Depends on cereal.), crackers...and i think that's it xD

< Message edited by Carly9467 -- 7/8/2011 0:53:20 >
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7/8/2011 1:20:35   
A Dreamer
Member

does u like mushrooms? because that's about 40% of my diet right there XD
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7/8/2011 1:30:28   
Carly9467
Member

No but i like potatoes n bagels xD
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7/8/2011 1:40:15   
A Dreamer
Member

lolz, love potatoes, and bagels r uber-tasty XD
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7/8/2011 1:42:39   
Carly9467
Member

ikr:D
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7/8/2011 1:50:13   
A Dreamer
Member

NEW CHAPTER :D
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7/8/2011 10:56:58   
Carly9467
Member

WEWT

EDIT


LOL i haz a sister


< Message edited by Carly9467 -- 7/9/2011 22:22:15 >
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8/15/2011 18:16:00   
Jae10
Creative!
Constructive!


< Read it and liked it! So Dreamer is a telepath right and you can enter dreams? That's an extremely epic power! I am pretty ecstatic that there are more psychic Smashers out there than I thought. If you weren't in Clown's Chaos Carnival I would readily invite you to be a Mindbender - we're basically good Smashers with varying mental abilities, lol. But anyway, lovely background info X3
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8/21/2011 14:50:41   
Celestin123
Member

Wow, sorry that I haven't commented until now, I've been busy. Anyways, this was a really good story, I find it interesting
how a normal boy came to be one of the Chaos carnival's most important members. I also like how your not one of those people
who make your stories like this: "Dreamer destroyed all 5,000 of the soldiers minds and killed 50 soldiers with one punch! He then
saved everyone and took over the chaos carnival!".

That actually happens a lot more than you'd think>.>. Anyways, can't wait to see how your other story goes!
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