Glais -> RE: (Pre-DF) Past Present Discussion (Rewrite in progress) (9/3/2012 17:30:41)
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Yes, it makes oh soooo much sense. I did at least try to get rid of Emotion being a Deus ex Machina anyways. Hence all the other junk they had to go through in the mountain. Emotion just showed em the way out. Rouan's a bit of an egotistical jerk, so I figured something that stupid was in character. As for the hair thing, well I'd tried to write it in a way that it was obvious there were other reasons, whatever they might be. spoiler:
Basically Emotion knows something about their family/white hair/etc. And yeah, the parents were lacking...everything. Will get to those fixes.
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