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VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 1:16:15)

No. Hes not from the future. He time travels frequently



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 1:17:32)

My mistake, I misunderstood. Eh, I just hate DF people having jeans. Personal quirk.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 1:19:55)

Cant think of better pants wear



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 1:23:45)

Also, its not that he has energy magic, its that he cant use it accordingly and properly



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 1:29:35)

One thing:

Can you get more people to read this. I know u must be annoyed...



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 1:32:25)

Oh no, it's not a Problem he has jeans, just something I personally dislike. It has no bearing on the story at all.

As for getting readers, I'm not really sure exactly how one would. All of mine were forumers I'd already built prior connections with. So I suppose my only suggestion would be to build connections with people?

It doesn't bother me though, the amount of people reading a story doesn't affect me reading it. I try to read most stories around here just to help the authors out best I can.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 2:55:16)

First backstory up



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 3:25:56)

If he's referring to Jaania...? How, Alexander didn't meet Warlic until RIGHT before he met Jaania so...?

Also, is Crow just really old or did his masters decide to send him back so long to train?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 8:06:58)

Yea, Crow is referring to Jaania

Its half. Celestial Slayers don't age as fast. A decade for a human is half a year to a Celestial Slayer in terms of aging



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 8:18:01)

Well then that's a bit of a continuity error.

And well, it's been around 200 hears since then apparently so...?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 8:20:32)

He'll see humans die out if he lives his entire lifespan



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 18:47:36)

Chapter 7 is up. I feel proud about this one, honestly.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 19:02:15)

Might continue the second backstory next....not so sure...



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 19:30:57)

Hm, can't help but feel Crow's grown a bit into a "typical main character" type.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 19:31:55)

Why do you surmise so ?



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 19:36:58)

He reminds me a lot of generic shonen protagonists. Angered really easy, incredibly powerful, etc.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 21:44:55)

Hes only angered by the mention of his father...incredibly powerful..,only so much



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/6/2012 21:47:55)

Believe me I detest those type of characters



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/7/2012 5:30:51)

Well that's good to know, he's just coming off to me as one of those at the moment. I understand the dad thing being a "berserk button" of sorts.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/7/2012 8:54:53)

Remember the beginning of the proluge



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/7/2012 14:58:54)

If I had to go by JUST the prologue, I'd feel even more inclined to my opinion. First impressions and all.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/7/2012 15:36:01)

It shows foreshadowing



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/7/2012 15:41:59)

True I hadn't picked up on that actually.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/7/2012 15:47:14)

Lol it pays to know my english

I graduated high school with a Gpa of 104%



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (4/12/2012 11:21:07)

Today I plan on pushing 5 long chapters out. These will focus on the much needed development of a few characters plus the introduction of 3 new characters. Stay tuned!



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