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Fei -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/15/2008 6:41:47)

Art Examples:

Image One: Signature

Image Two: Drawn via PhotoShop



Constructive Criticism:

Image 1: "Desire": I find this to be a very unique signature. The bottom left corner of the signature is absolutely beautiful. The glowing effect around the circular design immediately establishes a mystical aura quite suitable for the overall theme of the signature. In addition, the glowing purple delicately integrates the text, "Desire", into the picture.

On the other hand, however, I believe the right side of the image has the potential to undergo significant improvement. First of all, the golden color, when juxtaposed beside the gentle purple, appears to be a little - for a lack of a better word - "out of place". Personally, I think a smoother transition from the purple to the gold would give the signature a more "tender" touch to it, which would be quite suitable for the "desire" theme. In addition, the anime render is slightly blurred, and the female's back gave me a small feeling that it is dissolving into the golden background - this may have been done intentionally by the artist - but I personally think the signature would look better with the render more attention-seeking than it is now.

Overall, it is a decent signature. With a little work on the coloring, it could become even better :3

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Image Two: Breath: "Wow" was my first reaction when I saw this signature. It is very elegant indeed. In this signature, the render, the background, the lighting, were all handsomely made. The sparks on the bottom left of the signature definitely reflects the woman's fiery and yet gorgeous nature... and the text, semi-transparent very succinct, gives power to the image. With the lively feeling emitted by the signature, I am not surprised to see it named, "Breath". Beautiful.



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the big 7 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/15/2008 11:03:37)

Examples of what i would put it:

image 1
image 2

Critcism:

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Disorder.jpg[/image]

Out of the 2 images i just saw i liked this one the most. I loved the colours used and how they were used. To me it gave a sense of almost how the girl is happy, and she is becuase she's following through with a dream of hers. Also, to the left and right of the girl are 2 bright shards of light. These would be really nice, but i'd perfer them place somewhere else in the picture that doesnt take your attention off the whole sig, as i cant seem to stop looking at the neck of the guitar becuase of that bright light on it.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/mystery.jpg[/image]

I didnt like this image as much as the one above. Although, i did like the colours used again. Also, the girl in the picture's expression just seems to give off a mysterious "vibe" one may call. You just cant tell too many things about her just by looking at her. The things i didnt like about this picture is that its almost "too simple" and looks just like a copy and paste job. It would have been nice to either add more shadow's to promote that whole "mystery" theme and to add maybe a few more things.


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animefreakk -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/15/2008 18:33:00)

Example 1:
[image]http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn124/xanimefreakkx/kakashi1-2.jpg[/image]
1.I like this one because the colors is great with the background and also this character-Kakashi-has a mysterious expression
Example 2:
[image]http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn124/xanimefreakkx/carnival2.jpg[/image]
This is second best, I think I use too much Sparks,but it does go well with the background and the text goes good with the picture.

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Khelios -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/15/2008 21:49:04)

Art/Music Examples:

Piano playing: Work 1
Sig: Work 2


Signature C&C

Okay, to get this started, I favor the texture of the text portion of the image. The lines that surround the text enhance the text and the flower that is above the final "y," although touching the letter, increases the appeal of the text, but also draws the attention of the viewer towards the center of the piece. The center of the piece seems a little barren to me; and I feel that the main focus, the person, is too far to the right and too simplistic compared to the remainder of the image. The lighting on the face appears to be flat and to the right of the image, while the rest of the sig appears to have a light source near the upper left of the image. Although this has been used in some forms of artwork, I find if making the sig a little too bright and too copy/paste. Also, the "aura" of darkness (is that hair? I cannot tell.) from the hair to the "clouds" draws the focus away from the face and towards the center and edge of the image. And lastly, the border seems to be a tad bit small, but that's not what I would consider a huge or glaring problem. To enhance the "mystery" theme, perhaps introducing darker elements and themes; such as more shadows, reducing the lighting on the background, changing the face lighting; would make it appeal more to a mystery theme instead of a light and happy one.


Alt Image 2 C&C

I find this MUCH harder to critique than the first image. Here's where I'll start: the lighting of the figure is out of proportion. The gloves and non-skin elements of the image look like a gray fog clouded them and killed the luster and brilliance they might have. Second, the skin is overproportionally bright compared to the rest of the image. The brightness is overpowering compared to the dullness of the clothes the figure is wearing. The shirt looks like it's choking the poor guy, the neck lines on the shirt look a ton smaller than the neck. Lastly, the last thing I notice is that the shoulders to the hands are REALLY long and the gloves are more voluminous and wider than the legs. and armor for the legs. That's all I have for that as of now.


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RavenRocker -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/16/2008 6:43:13)

Young Raven
MR uniform that i drew (didnt win though)

Consecutive Criticism: MysteryThe Sakura pink background doesnt fit with the serious expression of the character, or maybe we have to keep the sakura background and change the position of the woman.
Consecutive Criticism: DisorderI Like the concept , i liked the glow on the neck of the guitar but i didnt like how it went too far at the end of the neck, the sparks r nice, it looks like its raining , if the right hand showed playing the strings it could have been perfect i guess , the japanese kanji is cool but why japanese ?

Last:"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."


Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check the link to Dep's thread on the first post.






animefreakk -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/16/2008 18:04:28)

Okay.

1st Example
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn124/xanimefreakkx/kakashi1-1.jpg
2nd Example
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn124/xanimefreakkx/riku-1-1.jpg

Criticism
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/mystery.jpg
I like how the background fits the character, and I can notice how the character shows out.The text is perfect for the picture and it just blends in with the picture.Also that the text color matches the eyes.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/desire.jpg
This picture is very special to me,I think that the backgroud is very colorful and that makes it pop out.I also think that the character glows and goes perfect with the colorful background.

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Amoeba -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/17/2008 2:33:32)

Examples-
[image]http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b386/bumwipe/number1.png[/image]
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b386/bumwipe/tagwall2007-1.png - this one is quite big featuring my older stuff

CC:

Image 1- The Gekko one.
It seems quite an old-ish signature, which i have seen quite a while ago. It shows some understanding into how a signature works and the aspects needed. Unfortunately it seems to be outdone by different styles emerging. The colours match the render, except they are used to much to create a monotone effect. The splash of red in the gekko's eye is a welcome effect.

Image 2- The Morning Dancer
A heavily used style, placed all around the signature, effective in the background, but not on the render itself. It seems there is not a clear lightsorce and flow to follow the render. The placement of the render is helps, showing a a decent coverage =P The text seems to be a little to dark and fades away into the background it is infront of.

I hope i wasnt speaking rubbish =)

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Oscarbater -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/17/2008 15:59:38)

[image]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll127/scrLvRt/Untitled-1copy.png[/image]
[image]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll127/scrLvRt/lvrt.png[/image]

CC:
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/desire.jpg
i like the grainyness of the background, but the render looks like it was simply pasted on.
the text needs work also, but i really like the colours of the background, just wish they matched the render a bit more.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png
the flow is almost flawless, but yet again, the text needs work.
the colours could be a bit less generic, and the effects are way too sharp, but it seems controlled.

i hope im good enought.

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sofaraway -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/17/2008 22:02:58)

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h28/allyofblood/Destinyindwarfform.jpg-paint

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h28/allyofblood/Destiny-LeDeNdS.jpg-paint

CC-
The colors match the picture. text could be way better. The lighting seems good and the coloring matche. The render looks like its been pasted on. text draws too much attation. the picture should have been centered.

Coloring is good but there doesn't seem to be any light source. The Smoke effect goes works with the backround. guitar looks like its on fire seemingly for no reason and it draws to much attation. The picture is in a good fiting pose that allows you to see the entire person (save her legs), rather then just a face and guitar neck.

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edited.... plz check again i am on pending

Better, keep working on it though. Place yourself on Pending again.



animefreakk -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/18/2008 8:28:22)

1st Example
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn124/xanimefreakkx/kakashi1-1.jpg
2nd Example
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn124/xanimefreakkx/riku-1-1.jpg\


Consecutive Criticism:

Image1. [image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/mystery.jpg[/image]
+Good text with background
+Good Border
+Pink background shines out
+Good matching color
-Text maybe to big

This image is very special

Image 2. [image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Inspire.png[/image]
+Blur around the body
+Smuge on the picture makes it more noticable
+The background matches the hair
+Foggy like also makes it noticeable
-Text too small

This image is very unique


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ronin101 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/19/2008 23:17:07)

my work
1
2


CnC

[image]http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w109/ronin102/grafhwork.jpg[/image]

very nice use of creativity
+nice render or stock choice
+i can see where the lighting is coming from
+on the legs you made it look like she was dematerilizing i like that effect it blends in well with the stock
-i cant read the text

this peice shows really just how good you can be if you try hard enough besides your work is always good [;)]




[image]http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w109/ronin102/grafhwork2.jpg[/image]

+i like how you used the effect with the smoke draw attention to the image
+nice work on the arm with the smudging it blends good with the smoke
+ohh and the text fits
+and i think i see use of a c4d if im worng correct me but it show uniqueness
-could have filled it a bit more to the left
-and you could have made the text a bit bigger

this peice of art shows the artists dedication. i mean it is like looking at the artist it looksyou worked hard on it and it wasnt slaped together in like 2 mins[:D]


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Jhimrey -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/21/2008 4:41:57)

Pic number one
Pic number two

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/mystery.jpg[/image]
I like this one, although I feel as if it doesn't balance quite right. Maybe the words can be tweaked a bit to balance it out.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/sentimento.png[/image]
I can't seem to find anything I don't like about this pic. It has nice balance, good composition, & excellent color scheme.

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Not approved. Check the rules, and you need to work on your CC. Check the link to Dep's thread on the first post. And you might want to use a cleaner looking font, but its still readable.



IKEELU! -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/21/2008 17:05:30)

http://www.dyinglegends.com
I design this sites weapons
[image]http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11272.png[/image]
i really don't like it because the words don't match the persons expression

[image]http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11273.png/image]
this one I just don't like the background it doesn't appeal to the eye

Not approved. Check the rules, and you need to work on your CC. Check the link to Dep's thread on the first post. And when posting image links, just post the image link, not the AE filter.



Jhimrey -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/22/2008 11:23:49)

Image 1,
Image 2 [image]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll159/Jhimrey/Sig3.jpg[/image]

Image one
I think this image has good lighting, nice colors (nothing clashes) & the letters are situated perfectly. That's what I like best. And I can't seem to find anything I dislike.

Image two
Good lighting, nice colors, but the top left corner seems a bit empty. I like how the background is designed to make her really pop, even as she is fading away, and the words are nice and discrete too.

And last but not least,

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Ghetto -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/22/2008 12:51:11)

Art Examples:
- Uno
- Dos

C&C
[Image 1]
To begin with, its a good signature. But to improve upon what awesomeness you have here, you might want to change or think about these suggestions. The text, "Pae, the Ravenous Gecko", is a tad on the distracting side. You want to have your text be there, yes, but have it compliment the piece in its own way. Try making it a little smaller next time, and move it around until you find the sweet spot for the text. Nice job on the lighting! BUT the frog's lighting side is on the left, rather than the FAR left of the sig. Try bringing the light closer to where the lighter side of the render is. =] The bg is good to, love that green/nature background. It really compliments the render in the ACTUAL setting it might be in. Not some artificial crap. Good Work!

[Image 2]
Good signature, Morning Dancer. I like the blurry almost grunge look of it. One thing I've learned is DON'T OVERUSE IT. The blur that is. It can be way overused and kill the signature. The text is there DEFINITELY not distracting, but its almost not there. Make it stand out a TAD more. Another thing that you might want to improve is the lighting source. It looks like you tried putting one in, but covered it up with the render. DON'T DO THIS. You want light. You don't want a black sig. I mean what is there to see on a black canvas? YOU NEED LIGHT =P One good thing about the distorts/filters used is that it matches the kind of broken look of the render. She's fallen/broken down = the blur of the sig, I can see that. Very nice. Over all though good work =] Keep it up Grafh-t-O's


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Valoths biggest fan -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/23/2008 13:24:22)

Art Samples

Examples of Work - [Image 1] plus [Image 2]

C & C

structive Criticism - 1

You could change the colour of the words as the colour makes ithard to read =- White i suggest to contrast the Black also

the background green doesnt seem to fade into the black it seems to have just a line of plain green not fading in and that is very noticable id consider making the green gat gradually darker at the edges

Although i do like the mix of colours in the background

also i think the woman seems very blurred and indestinctive like just in the background

+Background
- Background colour contrast at edges
-Colour of words
-blurred women

Image - 2

Like the last one the colour is very hard to see i would chose either a brighter shade of white and make the text bigger as it is very small

The blend of how the pink mixes smoothly ingto the black

also there is a long blur comin from the clothes as a streak of white which i believe

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Scourge -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/23/2008 15:12:03)

Art.
1.[img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2336/sigofdoomuo9.jpg[/img]

2.[img]http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/7898/herooftime2wq4.gif[/img]


Criticism.
1.[img]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/desire.jpg[/img]
Well I think the same color of the text and background in the left side dosen't seem to quite fit. While well done it feels like the focal point is the special effects. The girl herself seems to not fit in. and gives of a mestrious and shiny feeling not a wanting or lust like the title leads me to believe. Overall it just seems to bright and distracting.

2.[img]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png[/img]
The first thing I noticed is that you said it was a sig but, it's to large! It's 50 pixels to tall like many of yours. No offense but with the ''breeze'' of the ''glass'' the focal point is right around her brest the head is just a nice add-on. With all of that black in the top right corner her hair blends in so it's like her head dissapear and the colors seem to throw off the picture.


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Approved. But you need to work on your CC.



IKEELU! -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/23/2008 17:07:12)

1.I draw the weps for this site
http://dyinglegends.com

2.

Image 1
I think the girls expression does not match the mood of the image. I think that the layout is well thought-out. You might have too many blank spaces in the border. I like the colors.

Image 2
I like the picture but there is too much of the same color. The background is too cluttered. I think there should be a little text and maybe make the border thicker otherwise I like it.

3. I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. Check the rules, and you need to work on your CC. Check the link to Dep's thread on the first post.

I don't get it the link works fine.



Alixander Fey -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/23/2008 19:27:48)



Zhoom's Eye Avvy

Approved forum avvy.


[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Branch.jpg[/image]
Well, it is very nice. I like the spark affect, and the color goes well with the young ladies skin. I have to say that I usually do not do critiques when humans (especially women) are involved because, to be honest, I despise the way the female body is often portrayed. However, I think you have caught a good balance here, her face is not overly "sexy" or "seductive," but it is rather inviting. I like the sparks to the side and I like the render in general.

However, the sparks on the side and the flame kind of take away from the text. I'm drawn first to her face, then to the slightly different color to the right, and then I see the sparks. I have to squint a little to see the text, do you know what I mean? It's a little to confusing, and I woud suggest taking out some of the colors, or arranging them so like colors are on the same sides.

All in all, it is pretty good and I like it alot... I like the way she seems to be looking at me and past me at the same time.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/sentimento.png[/image]
O_o I think you've done a great job here, good work on making the same recurring color come back. Her jacket, the light behind her, and the guitar strings all match very nicely. Her pants and the guitar base match as well, and I like how the design on the chair is kind of like in the middle of the picture. Of all of the work I have seen from you, this is my favorite.

That said, I am not sure what is behind her. Is it clouds? I thought so at first, but then I looked at them again and I cannot tell. Also, there is something strange right behind the top of the guitar. It is... wierd... I think it looks like a bell to me, but I cannot really see it. I don't know why it's there, but it may serve a purpose that I do not understand. Also, perhaps you could color the background a little brighter? It seems to be just a tad too grey to match her. I realize that she is kindof suposed to stand out, but I think it would help.

Anywho, I like the way that she is intent on her guitar, almost as if she doesn't care if I am watching.

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lil boi blue -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/23/2008 22:32:10)

man
mafia
_______________________________________________
eagle
the black text fits well until you see the black background blend in with it, either replace the black stripe with light pink/white or move text over.
make the text gold/tan/white gradiant with a shadow. i don't understand significance of blue on wing tips, doesn't blend in well with rest of the picture.
++ overall i really like the use of golden/bronzed eagle just wish it mixed better with the grey and blue on the wings. replace black with white/light tan and the blue with glowing golden yellow.

girl
the liquifying on the girl's shirt makes it look sloppy and looks like it should be a transparent layer in the background rather looking directly off of her shirt. the girl is more on the right when because she is the focal point of attention and should be more centered. i like the blur on her arm but could use a light glow outline on her arm. use more smoke moving towards her rather just randomly sitting off to the side. increase the pink smoke thats around her head.

both pictures overall; every object in a picture must connect to the theme of the picture or focal point, not just an addition to make it look filled up and not empty
praise is nice to hear but it doesn't bring out the best in an artist.
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I_AM_SO_EBIL -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/24/2008 4:40:30)

This is the edit of my last post:

quote:

Number 1
Number 2

Criticism:

Image 1
Colors blend well and they are somewhat nice, but they are a little too bright for me. The render is nice. It suits the `breath` theme and that's good. The effects are also nice but they are a bit overcontrasted. The flow is not so good, lightning it's everywhere. Although the text is brilliant, I get distracted by it specially by the tiny Grafh. I'm not a big fan of small borders but this one suits the tag perfectly.
Image 2
I like the choice of colors on this tag but I find them distracting. The render matches perfectly those colors. For me, this tag lacks of effects. The tag feels empty and it also looks empty: just a render and a huge text. The text caught my attention and I find it very distracting. Again he flow is not so good. Once more, the border suits the tag.

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bandio 101 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/24/2008 7:43:10)

1[image]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll137/Bandio_bucket/gunngirlsmudgewithoutline.png[/image]
2[image]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll137/Bandio_bucket/badboywithsmudge-2.png[/image]


http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/eagle88.jpg

I think that its a good tag although it dosen't have much depth and the text isn't that good. Also the colors are hectic.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Morning-Dancer.png

The effects are okay but the background at the sides is pretty plain. The text is okay but I would suggest just leaving text out altogether as it can ruin your tags.

Hope you can reply soon.


Not approved. Check the rules, and you need to work on your CC. Check the link to Dep's thread on the first post.



Angelic Rose -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/24/2008 8:49:35)

1. My tag examples.


2. Constructive Criticisms.
    > Image one: The colors of the tag are a little too brigh but it does fit with the render. The effects around the render fits perfectly. The render is all well placed and it blends well with the background. The left part of the tag is somehow empty, it could be done some more works. The lighting is just fine. The text is well done but the color is not right, using a light tone would be preferable so that it can blend well with the other. I like the flow of the tag, it goes in some direction so smoothly and the lighting is a good touch to the flow. In this tag, I really like the color scheme even though it's like somewhat close to monotone, + the render is nice specially that it's a real world render. I also like the lighting very much, the only thing I hate is the text + the empty space at the left. It's a well done tag overall. =)

    > Image two: The render is hawt + the well suited color scheme. Again, the render is well placed and blends well with the Background. There are only small parts of the tag that is empty so it's well done but I don't like the sparks near the head of the render, It ruins that part IMO. The flow is great, everything flows smoothly. I don't like the text because it's not legible enough to be read and can be place better in other parts of the tag. I really like the C4D and the light source and the only thing I hate is the text and the sparks near the head of the render. Overall, it's an awesome hot tag.


4. I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved



GFX_Makuur -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/24/2008 9:28:14)

Examples
Example 1
Example 2
CC
Image One
+ Nice Blend with text and background
- Render doesn't seem to fit.
_ very nice work
+I like the background in general. easy on the eyes
Image 2
+ I like how she fits with everything.
+ Background fits well with render
+ Nice Smooth Blend
+ Clearly readable text
Other

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved. Need to be on pending.



Sakumei -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (5/24/2008 9:57:44)

Example 1
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/489/bhhy4.png

Example 2
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/3351/bh1in2.png


constructive criticism
image 1 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Branch.jpg
the first thing i noticed in this sig, is the c4d on the left side, honestly this sticks out with render and the bg, it dosent really contrast well with the outcome.
then i noticed is that the right side of the sig is empty but the left side is filled with effects and such, not really the best idea but it still looks good
now the text is way too small and the color makes is kinda unreadable, perhaps if you made the text color white, it would contrast well with the white c4d.
overall the outcome is good and the boarder makes a nice finish,

image 2 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png
i cant help but notice that you used the same techniques for both tags expect that the first 1 one is perhaps a stock.
well anyway the light source of this tag bugs me, the whole lighting is on the render and everything esle is dark.
i see a contrast between purple and red here, its a bit of a eye sore, i would suggest that you focus on 1 color, purple would be a good choice since it would blend well with the render. other then that this is a neat tag but its way to simple


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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved.



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