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mastin2 -> Plague|Epidemic~Comment Thread 1.5 (7/10/2008 16:30:01)

At the risk of sounding Cliche, the world has changed. Everything that was so hard earned has been lost and an old foe has returned. A new deadly type of enemy has sprouted. A new type of servant has come fourth. A new world has been born from the plague that has destroyed so much. And those two siblings are at the heart of it all. Those two are the ones destined to free the land when even I could not...Those two may succeed where I failed three-hundred years ago and break the chain that has been cycling for a time long enough that even I do not know. Those two...are the heroes now...

Plague


Plague is the sequel to Disease (Well, The Sequel to the Sequel), but no worries...you can understand (almost) everything without reading a word of the original! But do be warned--there are some spoilers contained within. Personally, I don't think they're so bad. But others may disagree.

Oh, and if you're wondering why the title's before the series, it's because I noticed how similar the threads were and needed something to distinguish them from each other.



Goals:

  • Get An AK to Post

  • Get Two Pages

  • Get Five Pages

  • Get two threads

  • Finish Plague within two years



    If you are interested in my works, please drop a comment at Disease Comment Thread

    Or maybe you are interested in My Combined Writings Thread?

    Then there's the upgraded Maze of Survival Comment Thread

    I strongly recommend both for at least a skim.


    Current Poll: None.



    • Crimzon5 -> RE: Plague|Epidemic~Comment Thread 1.5 (10/16/2008 7:22:44)

    Okay... I havent read part 2 yet... and I still remember the summary of part 1... so here I go!

    quote:

    “Okay, we’ve been training for half a week, and still nothing…you mastered your initial powers in a few hours and yet after all this time, we haven’t even discovered what our actually powers are! ‘Tight not be worth it!”
    THe bolded word needs a space from the elipsis (...) and should be capitalized for it can stand on its own as a sentence.

    quote:

    so I think I know what that means…’tight’

    Small error but the 1st apostrophe is facing the opposite way

    quote:

    The rest of the group seems to take some humor to this, but not Andria nor her brother. The brother sadly sighs, before stating, “I might have had a name at one..."

    You lack the bolded characters

    quote:

    The brother admits, “I don’t know,” as he loweringed his shoulders as if to confirm this, before continuing, “The only thing I can think of would be…Ronin.”

    Just suggestions



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