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Jae10 -> RE: (HS) The Good, The Bad, and The Chaos. Discussion (6/19/2011 16:38:26)
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< Wonderful start Clown!
I can see the real Western history through this tale (or collection of tales maybe), the inevitable tragedies for the Natives (I always found that personally troubling) and the greed of the foreigners that take over; the rise of a criminal lair, the lost civilization of Aquatia, the beginnings of other strange phenomena that ensue.
It's neat how you've incorporated some of our charaters into the story already with different roles. I can totally see Velmur as Sherriff, trying to keep the peace of the town of course.^^ I must admit, a General Store would have probably been the best place for me had I actually lived during that particular time period. Although, I do hope the Sherriff won't allow any rotten thieves to break in, or I might not have a job D:
Also, you based real in-game map points (like Aurora Park, Liberty Square, etc...), and adapted them to fit your story, but leaving them recognizable for readers that are familiar with HS. Splendid job!
*Lol, I don't why the town of Dirt from 'Rango' keeps popping into my head whenever I think of Over Look in this story. Well they're both western related I suppose. I know they're probably nothing alike, but I find it hard to control the visual referrences to movies my brain makes when I read certain things. Also, I've seen 'The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly' film, featuring Clint Eastwood - which was a fabulous movie! That's obviously the reason behind why I'm totally enamoured with the title you've chosen for your new story. =^^=*
I'll try to keep track of this story and see where it goes when you return. :3
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