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kors -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (8/9/2013 0:09:59)
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Well since I am way behind on where I wanted my story to be here is a little portion of the first part:
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A layer of snow crunched under Glacius' Tri-elemental Wizard as he followed closely behind Glaciar. The forest around them began to look dead, the normally green coniferous that grew on the fringes of the territory that was considered Glacius' turned to black and leafless trees. With every step the night grew darker despite the dawn being much closer than midnight.
Hours passed, snow continued to pour down for miles ahead and behind the army. The darkness around them did not fade in the slightest, telling them they were nearing the heart of Nocturu territory. A land of eternal night, much like the lands that make up Darkovia, was filled with a fine layer of snow now. Perhaps even the Castle had been touched by the blizzard and the Truphma were suffering the blinding combination.
Hikari closed his eyes as he felt the winds change in a way that few in the Clan would notice. “Almost there... The battlefield is not far,” Glaciar looked towards the Wizard solemnly. When he finally opened his eyes the bear could tell that something had clicked in his head and told him now was the day to put aside his dislike of war.
This one part is really going to show off how powerful I would expect/hope the leaders of the Clans to actually be, after all few leaders of Lore are the weakest of their group(well except Xov, but what do you expect of her?[8D]).
Edit: broke the 45 page mark... and the 20k mark a while back too. I think if I manage to finish this in the time left, I will have a decently long short story(or is that far too long to be a short story?).
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