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Mritha -> =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/21/2013 21:34:05)

All comments for the stories, poems, and battle hymns for this war go here. If you would like to make a story of your own, post it in the =DF= Dragon Rose War Story Thread!



Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 18:43:09)

Saturday?! Wolf-buddy! That's too long to wait. :(

Oh, well. Great start so far, Really looking forward to seeing where you go with it.



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 18:44:25)

@Faerdin: Interesting start. Does the poor ending also mean that your character will cease fighting in the war?



Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 18:49:19)

I do wonder, though, wolf-buddy. Is a good result in one meter and a poor result in the other going to result in a total of 'Poor'?



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 18:51:26)

@Ginkage: It says both meters wars, so I'd say that'd be the case.



Faerdin -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 18:57:47)

No result of my war story will subsequently affect my war activity.
I'm beating up The Rose no matter what. ;)

Thanks for the feedback!



Mortarion -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 19:15:56)

Well, Reborn into Shadow's is up



Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 19:17:43)

Not for the poor result, Dwelling. Only for Great and Good. So I can assume, going off of that, that if one meter is at 15%, and the other is at 25%, he'll go with the 'conflicted' result. What I was trying to ask (and failing at, lol), was what if one meter is at 25%, and the other is at 14%, or something similar. Is he going to be conflicted, or is he going to fight with the Rose?



Mortarion -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 19:24:39)

Some imput on my story would be good. I know it's not as long or as good as Fae's, but I try my best



Jaden -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 20:52:55)

Hello writers, my story: "Silent Doubt" Is now written and posted. Feedback is appreciated!

On another note, Faerdin, I enjoyed your story. It's a good idea to make the outcome depend on the war status. Adds just that much more immersion. On top of that it was just plain well written.

Mortarion, I like the buildup for your story, and I'd like to see more of your main character's interactions with the other heroes. Love a good soul eater!



Mortarion -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 21:24:13)

Thanks Jaden, and this is not the first time I am using Mortarion, he has a back story (which I have to re-work and finish) but if you are interested, I can link you to it. Thanks once again, any grammar corrections by the way?

And speaking of interacting with other heroes, PM me if you want my char to interact with yours (this is for everyone by the way) :)



Jaden -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 21:41:02)

"in the battlefield"
I think it should be "on the battlefield"

That's all I can spot. Btw once you finish your back story I'll check it out if I have time!



Mortarion -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/22/2013 21:42:39)

Thanks for the help, and ok



Faerdin -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/23/2013 14:55:36)

Considering the dilemma regarding support or disapproval for The Rose through Book Three, I enjoyed Jaden's story quite a bit. It did a very nice job of summarizing the internal conflict that is likely afflicting a good deal of people (Possibly even the Hero of Dragonfable) and capturing the tense air of waiting before the beginning of war.

@Mort: Devouring the souls of the dead... A very interesting concept, and not one I have seen from a warmonger as of yet. :)



Jaden -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/23/2013 15:09:41)

Thank you Faerdin! On another note, is it alright if I give small appearances or mentions of other people's characters? I may write a small continuation of my story and I think it would be cool to bring others into that.



Faerdin -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/23/2013 15:10:18)

Of course! Including other warmongers is something of a tradition for war stories. :)



Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/23/2013 15:26:28)

Jaden, I've seen a lot of people include others in their war stories (and I enjoyed yours, btw). But I think that the practice is to ask permission first, and then include the person. Then again, I wouldn't know. I've never done it.



Mortarion -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/23/2013 15:44:06)

Fae: Well, someone is always bringing innovations. You could call me Melquiades (I doubt anyone gets the reference, but meh)



deather98 -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/23/2013 15:44:25)

Hope you all didn't mind the poor grammar in my story and hymm



kors -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/26/2013 15:51:34)

Well here is my war story. I cut it short towards the end just because everything up to the last paragraph has been taunting me to finish it so I did. It feels like quite the cliche ending though so if I can get to focus on that I may just do more(highly unlikely as I have 3 other big story projects buzzing in my head and all the ideas for this one are drowned out by the others).



The Odor -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/26/2013 22:59:37)

Okay against what I originally planned I made a War story for this war. C&C would be appriciated.



Stephen Nix -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/28/2013 1:21:03)

Ok well, I have made a war story part 1 and will unleash part 2 upon us at 50%, what do you guys think?



deatharrows -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/28/2013 13:41:09)

I made a story. Please read it if you want. It's kind of awesome... just know I'm not a master author like almost everyone else here so my work isn't as good by comparison but I put in a lot of effort so please read it if you want. Click here for the war thread page which contains the story.



AlkaNephrite -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/28/2013 20:12:48)

I actually made a story for once...and it turned out weird...*headdesks*...why does this always happen to me? Why?

Can people delete posts in L&L forums? I accidentally double posted and I can't seem to find the delete post option...



Gingkage -> RE: =DF= Dragon Rose War Commentary Thread (6/28/2013 21:30:20)

Nix. Other than the fact that I'm very certain that it's spelled 'Ma'am' here:

quote:

Raharu Ydra: Umm, I mean, ahhhhhhh. Mame.


I didn't see any obvious errors.



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