Brynn Summers
Winter-Spring 2009 Honoured Writer
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Here is my edit... quote:
Shoving whatever it was he wanted into an inside pocket of his duster, he looked around the area, sweeping it for potential witnesses. quote:
Eyeing the retreating shadows once more, she realized they were headed north. quote:
Behind her, two daggers were drawn, and Elyra recognized the sweet sound of the duet. quote:
Pulling her own daggers from their sheaths, they joined the song, and Elyra paused long enough for the scant light to reflect off the sliver blades and jeweled hilts. quote:
Her foot connected with his abdomen, and he stumbled backwards. quote:
Both vampires rushed Elyra, weapons drawn, and she realized she was trapped. quote:
Before she knew it, the wall loomed close, and she had to think quickly. quote:
Gathering herself, she leapt up, and Elyra vaulted off the wall and over the slashing vampyre. quote:
A horrific throbbing in her leg forced her to look down, and she swore audibly. quote:
Slowly, he descended the steps and the two men before him, on their knees, visibly trembled. quote:
I need a suitable punishment, and now is not the right time to make such an important decision. ” quote:
Julian watched the old man walk slowly towards Yelsef and kneel beside the weakened man. quote:
We will get Her this time, and I will finally learn who has been the thorn in my side for years. quote:
Struggling to breathe, Elyra tried to sit up only to be knocked back down by a blow to the face. quote:
Tears poured down her cheeks, and Yelsef relished every one that fell. quote:
Falling hard, her body was jarred upon landing on the ground, and she finally managed to scream from the pain. quote:
Suddenly her mind reeled, and she tried to fight Julian. quote:
Julian reluctantly released his hold on her, and Elyra crumpled to the floor. quote:
The icy air chilled her skin, and she couldn’t understand why it didn’t affect Yelsef. quote:
The nausea overwhelmed Elyra, and she closed her eyes while she was carried. quote:
The darkness that followed each memory left her cold and lonely; only one voice filled that darkness, and she did not want that voice in her head. quote:
Broken bones became whole, and her bruises slowly faded. quote:
Touching her skin, he felt a thrill rush through his body, and he hungered for her. quote:
But, I fear her greatly, and what she could still be capable of. quote:
After a few minutes, her awareness began to heighten, and her memory recalled those final details before she slept. quote:
Ess’ entire body shook as he watched the most deadly daggers in all of the city come close to his skin. quote:
She placed her boot into the wound and dug her heel into it. I'm looking forward to reading more! I hope I didn't over do it! *hugs Eukara*
< Message edited by Brynn Summers -- 8/22/2008 20:17:02 >
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