Razen
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This was...like Glai kinda small-scale, but I did get the bigger picture that it's what only begins the second part. As well, I guess Taran makes more sense now. xD So far, Galbardi is seemingly like the most interesting character in the world. He doesn't always betray Tumultu, but when he does, he takes a kid to safety. That was horrible. ;-; Now though, I like the update, but the characters seem rather...well...lifeless, there's no emotions shown about, I would've expected some tears to be shed by some more of Iktopir's people would show their remorse at the loss of such a fine city. I say this, because my character, Fadril Llethran, sees the Ancient Elven Capital of Sarmetreis(Which is the greatest city of Vereriaz) in ruins and flames, he can't hold back his remorse while listening to the Gargoyle's sing their sorrow at the loss of the dominion. Not a necessary thing, it's just one of those things that helps develop the importance of it.
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