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7/11/2011 12:31:15   
Celestin123
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Hello peoples I finally started my story, The Revanchist!
I hope my readers like it and I plan to work really hard on it!
Here is the link to my story
! The Revanchist

< Message edited by superjars -- 7/12/2011 13:14:20 >
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7/11/2011 12:43:24   
Ancientz
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Nice story Celest, but you forgot to put your Disccussion thread link on your story thread.
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7/11/2011 12:45:12   
Celestin123
Member

oh write sorry i forgot, thanks for reminding me Ancientz xD



< Message edited by Celestin123 -- 7/12/2011 17:19:55 >
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7/12/2011 2:51:01   
Axilmeus
Member

The story looks good so far and I'm waiting for subsequent chapters. Granted, it'd be much easier to read if divided into paragraphs.
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7/12/2011 13:15:46   
superjars
Member

To be honest, the color formatting makes it a difficult read and therefore hard to give a fair assessment of. Some of them hurt the eyes.
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7/12/2011 13:24:24   
Celestin123
Member

@Superjars: Hmm the color seems fine to me but I see
what you mean so ill try to make the colors darker

Edit: Ok i edited the colors so i hope you find it more readable but if
it still hurts your eyes ill make it even darker

@Below: Actually the story is kind of my perspective
of the aftermath of comedy and tragedy


< Message edited by Celestin123 -- 7/13/2011 20:21:50 >
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7/12/2011 13:41:42   
Master Kage
Member

its quite interesting, I am assuming that the reason Super City was destroyed was the war between Demolicus and Davinci
Edit-Oh i did not read the note before the story


< Message edited by Master Kage -- 7/12/2011 13:55:03 >
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