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4/13/2012 15:10:44   
Eukara Vox
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 Here is where you talk about the war stories!

=DF= Friday the 13th - Rising Fire! War Stories and Poetry April2012

< Message edited by Eukara Vox -- 4/13/2012 15:16:01 >
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4/14/2012 1:43:12   
Cataclysm
The fanciest of moustaches


 I think I'll break from tradition and write a story here while holding another story still actively. This one probably won't be the greatest, but it'll be a warm up to get me back into the style and feel for the characters of Cataclysm. Don't expect anything grand, but I'll throw something up tomorrow. I gotta get my 350 kills in today, yet. Tomorrow as well.
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4/15/2012 0:07:26   
Mortarion
Member

Posted my story, tell me what do you think of it

< Message edited by Mortarion -- 4/15/2012 22:15:05 >
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4/16/2012 5:11:02   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 I made a little introduction to my trip.

@Mortarion:
quote:

HE looked absently at the crystal in his chest.


Any specific reason as to why he is fully capitalized? Other than that, it's fine to give us an insight as to how Mortarion battles.
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4/16/2012 5:32:09   
Mortarion
Member

Slight mistake on my part, and as you have read my storie,this is after my storie finnishes it's Malorum's part
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4/16/2012 5:48:38   
Kinzdor
Member

You know I always use Kinzvlle for these kind of things. Chain and Steve never get any love! Might just right something about Chain, commanding HAS in this war, while Kinz is away. Wonder if I could work Steve in there.
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4/17/2012 21:04:05   
Cataclysm
The fanciest of moustaches


 Another journey into mediocrity. I felt this one more, but I just didn't get a lot of writing in. Pity. I was trying to write more, but the writing just shrugged and said "No. You're done writing for now."

It is what it is.
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4/17/2012 21:45:33   
Mordred
Member

Don't feel down about it, man. A story should be a living thing; sometimes it is out of even the writer's grasp. It's not an easy art. Everyone's experienced things they just can't do. I've had my own stories that have withered and died; every writer has.
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4/18/2012 0:00:35   
Cataclysm
The fanciest of moustaches


 I think it's mostly that I haven't been writing much, and what I have been writing, has been distinctly non-action-y, which is the opposite of what Cataclysm is. I'm not much used to writing anymore and I'm even less used to writing action scenes. There's also that writing has always just kinda flowed for me, so having to really ponder seems just downright strange to me.

That, and I'm always ridiculously self conscious and overly self-critical, in everything, everywhere. Retrospectively, I think I did a good job with this section, I just feel like I could've made it longer and more awesome. About 20% more awesome. (Pardon the last sentence; other than that, it was entirely serious.)
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4/18/2012 6:31:39   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 A part from a part in the beginning, it is fine by me, Cataclysm. Splendid as always.

If I get around to finishing mine (which is terribly short, but somehow I have not gotten around), I will post it. Hopefully, today.

Edit: Posted.

< Message edited by Elryn -- 4/18/2012 18:49:29 >
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4/19/2012 23:14:22   
Mordred
Member

Updated my story. I'm really liking Beaumont now. ^^
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4/20/2012 4:15:23   
Glais
Member

@^:The ending...Alucard vs Tubalcain Alhambra?
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4/20/2012 6:21:13   
Mordred
Member

No, I've only seen the fight scene with Luke Valentine. :P

I really enjoy this new story. It's fairly different from my usual stuff.
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4/21/2012 15:01:29   
Cataclysm
The fanciest of moustaches


 I'll wait for Sunday, then I think I'll read through all the stories. By then, I figure most people will have completed them. I'll give some feedback once I've read them all.

I also finished my story last night, so I'm done writing for now. I liked my final update.
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4/23/2012 14:20:11   
Mordred
Member

I finished my warstory and posted the end. It's much longer than I expected it to be. XD I feel the fight scene with Fiamme is... really bad, but I don't really know where to go with it. I'm very much happy with everything else, though. Very slight connection to some of my other work(s) as well. Sir Mordred is from my entry to the Character Backstory contest, if any of you remember.
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4/24/2012 17:54:52   
The Odor
Member

I have posted another bit of my warstory today. So read it before the thread is lost to time. Or you know... Don't.

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Where is my Hat of of Darkness, Dorkishness and Despair?
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4/25/2012 7:32:03   
Razen
Member

Just got to reading Mordred's Warstory, I will say, it was good...looked like it might've had a few errors though. But, it was only...like two. So, no problem-o.

I suppose TCO, DD, and Elryn are the others on my list then? I'll try to get to them later today.
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