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7/16/2012 18:37:25   
Evil Torn
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Story located here.

All commentary/critique/discussion is welcome, even if bad.

~E.T.

< Message edited by Evil Torn -- 7/16/2012 18:38:19 >
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7/16/2012 21:02:33   
Glais
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Read the prologue. I'm not a fan of involving Earth in DF at all, but even with that bias you've handled it very well.

ElFok being Batman is hard to take serious though xD
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7/20/2012 20:28:57   
Evil Torn
Member

Added some more chapters.

~E.T.
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7/21/2012 5:44:15   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 EDIT: Your grammar looks good, but I'm having issues with the current powerlevels of our Terran protagonist.

Please clarify if I'm mistaken, but he seems to have complete control over magic of others to the degree of an Archmage.

< Message edited by Dwelling Dragonlord -- 7/21/2012 6:40:49 >
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7/21/2012 13:27:06   
Evil Torn
Member

The shield that he generated was only a basic-level spell, any beginner learning magic should be able to know it. Kind of like Mage's defense skill. The ability to push it back was also very easy, considering ElFok Vezar had only fired a beginner fireball. He doesn't have complete control of magic, but it's in his blood that he learns magic quickly and is able to perform it with ease. Being transported into DragonFable...changed him, to say the least.

That also explains how he is able to block almost all of ElFok Vezar's attacks. He's not lolh4x, nor is he nowhere close to being lolh4x. He is, however, above average.

I'll probably get around to explaining that in greater detail in one of the chapters. I can't really do it right now, because, well, they're kind of busy with war and don't have time to sit and talk.

~E.T.
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7/21/2012 15:16:47   
Glais
Member

quote:

He said that he had always had it for decorative purposes in my house

Eh?

Anyways, interesting how you're trying to change the future.
DF MQ  Post #: 6
7/21/2012 15:19:05   
Evil Torn
Member

quote:

Eh?


YOU SAW NOTHING.

But yeah, I'm sort of trying to change the future. I plan on giving...well, you'll read it. Eventually.

~E.T.
AQ DF  Post #: 7
8/16/2012 20:35:29   
Evil Torn
Member

Took hiatus. Don't expect too many updates. Will come at random. School's keeping me busy and stuff.

New chapter.

~E.T.
AQ DF  Post #: 8
8/16/2012 20:58:31   
Glais
Member

Good chapter.

Xan's dialogue felt a little forced though.

< Message edited by glaisaurus_x -- 8/16/2012 20:59:05 >
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