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2/8/2014 18:18:48   
DidYouKnowThat
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@Mondez: That was going to be one of my ideas IF the contest allows dual characters. . . .

My idea was 2 small dragons fighting as ONE. . . .so it's one character with 2 parts. . . . .

Looks like we'll be suggesting the same general idea. Lolololloll.
Post #: 626
2/8/2014 18:21:59   
Mondez
Member

@DYKT
Oooooh interesting, but it should because it is considered a single character with two character sprites aka Darkon Drago although a whole character is essentially two separate conjoined design.

I'm not going to spoil what my design on the double single character artwise and story wise is because it's in the process, but working out very well.

*Edit
I'm actually anticipating the Legendary form of my Necrosis since it is stretching the concept and I don't want to tire Nulgath out after two massive detailed monsters were released aka Moose and Astor. I'm actually a bit ambitious with the design because it's actually to push the limitations on Oversoul on the character design granted if it wins.

< Message edited by Mondez -- 2/8/2014 18:26:24 >
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2/8/2014 18:34:28   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

@Mondez: Nice. So we'll be in for quite a nice surprise then. . . .Your idea sounds awesome. A family eh? Lolol.

And you know what'd be cool though, Skeletons carrying the family on a Carriage. . . . .. . or something. . . . riding on a giant Skeleton Spider? lolol

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As for me, it's either 2 smaller dragons with a storyline, or a two-headed dragon. . . haven't seen one of those yet in Oversoul now have we? :)

Uhm, as for card decks. . . you see why I would want it to be dual elements.

BUT THEN AGAIN, it could be single element. I mean, take a look at Weezing in pokemon. Two poisons come together to form a BIGGER poison, so I'll have an EXCUSE to make my character so strong. LOLOLLOL.

(edit) Well in my opinion. .. I don't think those two characters were that worth it to take up 80% of his soul. . . I mean look, barely anyone has gotten it, and it's making a lot of people angry or somethin'. Well maybe not ANGRY, but you get what I mean.


< Message edited by DidYouKnowThat -- 2/8/2014 18:36:02 >
Post #: 628
2/8/2014 21:12:40   
Gorillo Titan
Member

@The jop they shared cards both characters from the 2nd had shadow and the 3rd had lightning cards.
Post #: 629
2/9/2014 6:16:46   
megakyle777
Member

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=21581068

I've improved on my Spymaster idea on the off chance that the element for the contest is Neutral. Tell me what you think, if there is any way it can be improved like the deck ETC.
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2/9/2014 23:18:33   
Axel459
The Void Calls


 @Mega Looks like a good character it has a nice little story theonly problem I have with it is the deck seems a little powerful for a master rank my suggestion would be taking out a corruption, deathflow, and neutralize for three 200 dmg cards.
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2/9/2014 23:22:05   
Gorillo Titan
Member

@Axel someone told me we need a crazy long story for are character to take part in the contest is it true?
Post #: 632
2/9/2014 23:24:25   
Axel459
The Void Calls


 Nope, you can enter a character without even adding a story if you want, Migo won and Aqueous didn't have a story.
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2/9/2014 23:26:17   
Gorillo Titan
Member

yeah but he did the art part of the contest. I can't really draw.

At least Mega didn't add iron hides but he could just CC them. two corruptions is a bit much though.

< Message edited by Gorillo Titan -- 2/9/2014 23:28:28 >
Post #: 634
2/9/2014 23:29:57   
Axel459
The Void Calls


 You could still enter with a short story as long as it is interesting you have chance of winning.
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2/9/2014 23:31:47   
Gorillo Titan
Member

Cool, could you give me some feedback on my suggested character?
Post #: 636
2/10/2014 0:43:59   
Axel459
The Void Calls


 I assume you're talking about the spider. The story doesn't really interest me, the spider got stepped on when it was younger and then fixed by Engineer they became best friends, alright that's fine, but then a simple flashback of being stepped on makes it go berserk and turns it into a killing machine? It just kind of seems like a lot to happen just because of a simple flash back and then finding a portal that just so happens to lead to Nulgath who gives it even more power it's sort of random and doesn't really add anything to the character.

My suggestion would be to focus more on the spiders friendship with the Engineer give it a little more personality, with it's body being mostly technology I'm sure it's not just a arachnid without intelligence anymore. If you still want it to become evil it needs other reasons then just a flashback of it being stepped on maybe there were people in a village who were frightened by the giant spider and tried to kill it the spider becomes enraged attacks them and while Engineer tries to calm it down it hurts the spider badly causing them to have problems with each other? I'm not really good at writing, but that's just my feedback.
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2/10/2014 0:52:09   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

Or it gets rejected by every human and crap, and also rejected by spider-kind since Engineer tinkered with it, so it got rejected, turned lone-wolf, went metal, didn't trust anyone,
and didn't like Engineer anymore since the ''tinkering'' got it cast out, and crap. So it goes around killing everyone. LOLOLOL.

Then it was all like, lets go kill some Makai. Then it stumbles across Nulgath, and Nulgath's all like, woot woot, a Killing machine, here's some power-juice or uhm, a contract thing whatever. Then BOOM, killing machine. . . . .

Eh, .. . my version. LOL
Post #: 638
2/10/2014 1:01:49   
Gorillo Titan
Member

I started rewriting it was gonna go for the shunned thing and Nulgath giving him power in exchange for him getting souls for him so he isn't completely mindless.
Post #: 639
2/10/2014 1:08:23   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

Oooooh! A Sanguine!?!!??! Like. . .it eats the souls OM NOM NOM NOM and like stores it away in the abdomen or something. . .and then MAYBE the storyline can say

When it spins webs, the silk is made from souls or whatever. So it's super strong and can be used for attacking and all . .. whatever . .

And the Soul Silk can ensnare souls too. So beware of its domain, for it can trap souls and all. . .
Post #: 640
2/10/2014 16:33:23   
Gorillo Titan
Member

I am a terrible artist but I feel this shows promise the flying things are bees.

http://t.co/TdlXXMQ45s
Post #: 641
2/10/2014 16:47:56   
LigerBeard
Member

Um, can I get some feedback on my suggestion I posted here: http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=21598663

As you can see, I tried to get some feedback before, but it got ignored.
@below: Yeah, I see. The thing is that my talent with anatomy is lacking at best. Also, interesting point involving the story, I wouldn't have caught that, I might add on before officially submitting it.

< Message edited by LigerBeard -- 2/10/2014 17:07:12 >

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2/10/2014 16:54:38   
The Jop
Member

It's okay. For the art, it's a bit small and some of Talos is misshapen, like his hands and feet. The story is okay also, but I don't like people using Nulgath as a plot device just to create a killing machine. Why would Nulgath attach this boy to a robot spider causing the boy's father to commit suicide? What could he possibly gain from that? Also, more about their lives before the accident would be appreciated, so you understand the bond they have. Otherwise his father doing all that and then killing himself seems extreme for the little we know about them.

< Message edited by The Jop -- 2/10/2014 16:56:01 >
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2/10/2014 17:17:42   
Mondez
Member

Even though it is Nulgath's world; Nulgath shouldn't be a catalyst for creating new forms of identity or life. I tend to like back-stories from when the character is born/created summarizing major events in his/her life to the end which creates a form of uniqueness and somewhat of a bond towards that character.
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2/11/2014 0:15:04   
Gorillo Titan
Member

Could someone give me feedback on my drawing?

http://t.co/TdlXXMQ45s
Post #: 645
2/11/2014 0:20:41   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

Uhm . . so he's like a humanoid made of honey combs. . . . and like. .. Bees as weapons. . . . . O.O

I get the general idea you're trying to get across. . . .I guess? If my humanoid-honey comb interpretation was right.

He looks bulky, looks like he's holding a nice amount o' bees. But any more details? Like any armors weapons he uses besides the bees. . . or like a walking honey comb. Lolol.
Post #: 646
2/11/2014 0:32:47   
Gorillo Titan
Member

Back story is Void Bees are creatures that live in the void but when a new queen is born she is laid in the body of creature and takes it over from the inside turning it into a living honey combish creature the queen lives in the brain producing offspring that protect the queen and there living honey comb home. The creature they have taken over is a giant humanish creature in this example. As the colony grows the body takes on a more honey combish look as they build more and more onto it till the creatures body is completely covered in the hexagonal shapes of combs.

The bees give off a very painful posion.

< Message edited by Gorillo Titan -- 2/11/2014 0:42:34 >
Post #: 647
2/11/2014 0:49:34   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

Good Lawd. Reminds me of the Flood from Halo, combined with the Xenomorphs from Alien . . . . .LOL.



Post #: 648
2/11/2014 0:56:04   
Gorillo Titan
Member

I just wish I could find someone to draw it better for me my drawing doesn't give it much justice looks like an anime character with a poop head>.> lol
Post #: 649
2/11/2014 1:03:56   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

@Titan: I'd give it a shot, but my drawing SUCKS. Lololol.

Well, my online drawing that is, when I use things like Sketchtoy.com or something.

I think I'm okay drawin' in real life. But too much of a hassle uploadin' it on my laptop and crap. Better off making a story. :)
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