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6/23/2013 18:58:30   
battlemaster25
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You know what, to heck with it. I'll do crossovers. If you're interested, tell me your character name and clan.

(Hict, I've already got your info. You're Hict the Immortal, Aerodu, correct?)

< Message edited by battlemaster25 -- 6/23/2013 18:59:26 >
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6/23/2013 19:12:02   
hict98
Member

@Battlemaster Yeah that's right. Thanks for doing a crossover with me in it.
@Kors I'm glad you are actually keeping your timeline of your story the same as the actual timeline of the war. I don't like when people start going ahead of the in game story and then their story ends up being extremely different from the actual story their story is based upon.
AQ AQW  Post #: 27
6/23/2013 19:24:59   
kors
Member

@battlemaster25: Mind if Kor crosses into your timeline? He may not be part of any Clan but he is willing to save anything and everything from the Truphma.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 28
6/23/2013 20:35:15   
battlemaster25
Member

@kors

Got it. Kor, no clan. Dislikes Truphma, but then don't we all?
AQ  Post #: 29
6/23/2013 21:28:38   
Muchiha
Member

Chapter 2 is up! Alot of character integration going on xD

My reviews for the other (and updated) war stories shall come sometime tomorrow afternoon
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 30
6/23/2013 21:40:01   
hict98
Member

@Muchiha I will stand up for Paxia.
#FORPAXIA

_____________________________
AQ AQW  Post #: 31
6/23/2013 21:42:01   
Muchiha
Member

And I shall stand with you my brother!

To the very end!

#ForPAXIA!
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 32
6/23/2013 21:44:00   
flashbang
Member

@Muchiha

Chapter 1: Paxia in Distress - Xov’s Letter
A good beginning. You show the threat off the back and show how much ferocity will be in your story.

Chapter 2: A continent divided – Paxia’s answer

This shows that Unity is the central theme of your story. You introduce the forumites and speeches galore.

Here are some battlecries:
#YOLOSWAG #FORPAXIA #PAXIAISSKEWL #DEATHTOTRUMPHA!

< Message edited by flashbang -- 6/23/2013 21:47:27 >
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 33
6/23/2013 22:33:58   
popinloopy
Member

@Muchiha
I refuse to go down. Even if it ends up that way, expect half of an army to go down with me!

#ForPaxia!

Part two is fantastic, Muchiha. There are some minor typos here and there, but that doesn't matter. If you want a bit of honesty from me, then the dialouge is too split. Too many people just seem to automatically know how to continue what the previous person has said. I know you tried to introduce more characters, and you found an excelent way to do that, but you might have just spread the speach too much between the characters. Just an opinion, though.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 34
6/23/2013 22:45:06   
flashbang
Member

Well, Chapter three of my story is officially up!
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 35
6/23/2013 22:58:14   
hict98
Member

@Muchiha and Flashbang I like how both of you showed how Paxia can unite when threatened. But Flash why Yoloswag, just why.
AQ AQW  Post #: 36
6/23/2013 23:00:05   
kors
Member

oh yeah, uh guys my characters name is Kor not kors . Other than that both are looking interesting. I especially like making Pepp bite his tounge. (no offense Pepp but I enjoyed it).
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 37
6/23/2013 23:51:25   
flashbang
Member

Don't worry kors I fixed it.
@hict you'll love this. popin went like:
quote:

Combine it with 1337. Ugh, I just shivered a bit. #Y0105W46
Then I said that #Y0105W46 would replace #YOLOSWAG in my story!
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 38
6/23/2013 23:52:24   
popinloopy
Member

@flashbang
*60 years later*
And I regret everything I said, even to this very day.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 39
6/23/2013 23:54:38   
battlemaster25
Member

So, the only volunteers I've got thus far are:

Kor (no clan) and Hict (Aerodu). Anyone else want to be in my story?
AQ  Post #: 40
6/23/2013 23:56:25   
popinloopy
Member

@battlemaster
I thought it went without saying that anyone can just add me to stories, no need to ask. So count me in as well. I'm a Lucian.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 41
6/24/2013 0:00:24   
battlemaster25
Member

Right-o. Consider yourself added. But I'm gonna capitalize Popinloopy 'cause I'm a grammar freak.
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6/24/2013 0:02:00   
popinloopy
Member

@battlemaster
Go ahead. I made this username when I was young and never heard the heart to change it, not even for capitalization, but I don't care what others do to it.

< Message edited by popinloopy -- 6/24/2013 0:32:34 >
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 43
6/24/2013 0:02:06   
flashbang
Member

@Battlemaster Add me in. Wyrm, Lucian. *looks at name* Your a grammar freak?
@popin you should regret what have you done. For all we know you may make everyone say it! MWAHAHAHHA!

< Message edited by flashbang -- 6/24/2013 0:03:58 >
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 44
6/24/2013 0:15:12   
battlemaster25
Member

quote:

*looks at name* Your a grammar freak?


Yep. It's called a mistake, we all make them. I've been meaning to get it changed, but eh. That requires effort, and screw that noise.
AQ  Post #: 45
6/24/2013 0:24:03   
popinloopy
Member

@battlemaster
I'm surprised you didn't correct it to "you're" in the quotes.

< Message edited by popinloopy -- 6/24/2013 0:32:25 >
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 46
6/24/2013 0:26:09   
battlemaster25
Member

I don't like editing quotes. It feels.... unethical to modify what someone has said. However, as we are drifting off topic, I digress.

(That's twice you've called me "battlemastre", by the way.....)

< Message edited by battlemaster25 -- 6/24/2013 0:29:18 >
AQ  Post #: 47
6/24/2013 0:33:09   
popinloopy
Member

@battlemaster
Thanks. Sorry, I'm tired and typos tend to happen during these circumstances. I have fixed it.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 48
6/24/2013 0:33:31   
hict98
Member

So I read the new edit for Flash's story and all I have to say is that I'm done. I just give up on this world. Good bye guys it was nice playing with you. I'm leaving Lore for another world eventually... and probably momentarily. I mean extremely momentarily because let's face it, this game is awesome and it would be hard to find a game as awesome as this.
@Battle mastre That sounds like a Latin name. Mastre. Now that I think about it I'm pretty sure it means master in Latin.
@Kor But your username is Kors

< Message edited by hict98 -- 6/24/2013 0:37:54 >
AQ AQW  Post #: 49
6/24/2013 1:19:00   
battlemaster25
Member

Alright! My story has been updated, and the first chapter is up. Worry not, this isn't the last you'll see of your characters. They'll all have some role or another in the upcoming battle.

(By the way, if you want to know who this "Kierra" lady is, and how she knows Storm, read my Absolution story)
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