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Elryn -> RE: (AQ/DF) Legacy of Blood (2/19/2012 21:15:19)
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Found another one:
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The orc who had been busy scavenging the corpses of shiny metal objects
For.
Edit: Here is more:
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I'd have done all of my work for not.
Naught.
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where he it sparkling in the sunlight in the midst of splinters.
He saw it.
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He over thought what he just had heard,
Thought over.
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We Ulgathi are nor blind, nor stupid, humee.
Hmmm... I am uncertain about this one, but usually, it would be neither followed by nor here. *chuckles* It could be very well be the orc.
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The both slowly walked backwards
They. Also, did they really walk backwards into the tent?
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The Dravir Lich said chill.
With a chill?
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Since he does not any of our brethren
Have.
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He said hatefully while unbuckled his mace.
He.
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if he hadn't Azer was sure he had learned a lot new Ulgathi curses.
He would have learnt/learned a lot of new Ulgathi curses?
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the bandit leader seemed to regain some of his sanity and arrogance.
*chuckles* I say he is still insane. (P.S. In other words, just a jest, no error here). I enjoyed seeing him run around like chicken in flames.
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Even the idiot I put in my crate knew of their involvement."
Shouldn't it be: Even the idiot that put me in this crate?
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You wouldn't think the cult would simply use it's own name for official business?
Do you think the cult?
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You are wrong to think I will teach him something that lightly
Something like that.
I have just finished reading. *grins* I may say I eagerly await for the next chapter. I also find it peculiar that you met Volu. If I may ask, whereabouts did the Dravir Mage's abode reside?
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