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UrufuHiken -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (3/28/2009 21:55:24)

*shrugs* [:D]



bobby1013852 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (3/29/2009 16:42:39)

xkiller killer-x bloodhunter ak-21 the dark warrior



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (3/29/2009 23:53:24)

*thinks* Your character will have to use an alias then.

Teaser Pic for Act 3 Part2

[image]http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll271/g3ev/Krey-1.png[/image]

ANd no... that is not Rebecca's Fiance... he's just coincidentially blond as well

spoiler:

Her fiance dies



marvin_the_robot -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (3/30/2009 0:18:09)

Oooh, flames. And swords for hands.

*thinks about Edward Scissorhands on fire*

Hurr hurr...

*cough* Anyway >_>

I can now say that I've read through everything now.

As such, now I can actually start looking for mistakes ^_^;



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (3/30/2009 0:27:35)

Thanks my robotic friend ^_^

And c'mon... the swords are just covering his hands



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 3/27 (3/31/2009 6:50:24)

Uhh... Act 3 part 2 up. Unfortunately... her part is... too long... so I had to split it up to 3 parts. Krey (the pyromantic knight in the teaser pic) will appear on the next update :D



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 3/27 (4/2/2009 0:51:59)

Okay... Acts 1-3 finished

Main story begins



marvin_the_robot -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 3/27 (4/2/2009 0:56:50)

What.

Main story? ;_;

*headsbangs from stress*



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 3/27 (4/2/2009 1:00:24)

Acts 1-3 were each divided into 2 parts:
1) a first-person narrative (not necessarily the/a main character though)
2) then a 3rd person narrative

Also, the acts were... focused on 3 seperate stories... which were somehow connected to one place: the Eastern Caverns

Now all those characters have gathered in one place. Fun begins [8D]



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 3/27 (4/5/2009 1:20:34)

Act 4, if lucky, will be posted later today. :D



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/05 (4/5/2009 8:27:32)

^And yeah... I'm lucky



Elosix the Grimjaw -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/05 (4/6/2009 9:54:17)

quote:

# Race: Demigod (3/4)
# Alignment: The Kingdom

So his Granpa, Granma, 'dad/ma?' are gods(/demi gods?) and his 'dad/ma?' is humee? right?



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/05 (4/6/2009 10:28:51)

His father is a/the god
his mother was a demigod (yeah... he married his own daughter)
his foster father is unmentioned... but let's say that he's half as well?



MeMoglin -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/05 (4/6/2009 22:55:57)

This story possesses a type of writing that I have never seen before. It is quite the story, hopefully it will be published and become a world famous book. I am quite amazed by your switches between emotions and physicals. I thought it would be quite hard ,but you accomplished it. Battle sequences were very descriptive. Way more descriptive than I have ever read. So all I can say is, write on! Congratulations! (Good job really, decided to use an even more compliment word to boost your confidence so you can keep on writing these amazing stories) Am I giving too much flattery? If I am, I'm sorry.
EDIT: I also found no errors. Good job! Keep it up and I also hope that your story that you created would be in-game. It would be an awesome saga for everyone. With all of the acts and things. I am sure (and hope) that the reward would be witnessing your creativity.



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/05 (4/6/2009 23:15:51)

Wow! Gee, thanks. Flattery is okay... as long as it has evidence to back it up :D



bobby1013852 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (4/9/2009 22:56:34)

cant wait man for the first chapter



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (4/11/2009 11:25:08)

^Already up! ^_^



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/12 (4/12/2009 9:47:58)

What makes a memory - chapter 2 - added. Heh, you might not like what you read about Alexander.

Expect... a lot of dialogues.



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/12 (4/19/2009 4:42:55)

Chapter 3 up!

err... spoiler(?):

[image]http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll271/g3ev/ffflag.jpg[/image]


xD



UrufuHiken -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/12 (4/20/2009 18:03:54)

Doing good so far man, keep it up! I like where the story is going! (I think) And I am starting to really understand the characters. (I am?) Okay, the point being, your doing good, and I can't wait for more of the story, (and character background revelation.)

If I were to suggest one thing, it would be a slight modification in your character's descriptions; that you use hair-color as a repetitive description too often, and I would suggest trying other things. Other then that, I can't find many qualms with it.[sm=fun_08.gif]



bobby1013852 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/12 (4/20/2009 19:33:20)

great work so far man



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 4/12 (4/21/2009 7:42:52)

Yeah... hair has been used often. I'll think of something.



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments (5/8/2009 23:31:57)

I'm under a minor editting process. But as for chapter 4... I gotta find a "technique" to make multiple scenes.

In the mean time, enjoy Rebecca's new look (click):

Pic



Crimzon5 -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 5/11 (5/11/2009 4:35:58)

Okay, chapter 4 is up

The title is a gag... you'll see why near the ending.



UrufuHiken -> RE: Myrmidon - Comments and pics - 5/11 (5/12/2009 17:14:06)

Hey, Crimz!

Hehe, its like a pit... but wooden!

PS. Add more detail on the "wooden pit," I must know more!



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