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Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/8/2011 11:42:14)

He wanted slaves, as simply as that, and he likes to make things personally



Glais -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/8/2011 13:39:17)

I read it a while ago, a bit weird but I can get the basic story.
But there is one thing I can't get over, the name "BosterBlader" is just to ridiculous. Doesn't fit in at all...



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/8/2011 14:33:52)

NAh will change it then, to Cruor changed it to cruor, aswell as some grammatical errors



Glais -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/8/2011 14:44:46)

Cruor fits much better, good choice.



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/8/2011 14:49:32)

Cruor is blood in latin [8D][:D][:D]



Mritha -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/9/2011 9:30:39)

If Malorum wanted slaves, then why did he burn so many of the vilagers alive when he could have taken them as captives?



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/9/2011 13:43:15)

He burned those who opposed him and as a tactic ofcourse, to undermine morale, I meant he burned lots of people that surely subdues someone



Mritha -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/9/2011 14:36:58)

Well, add that in your story.



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/9/2011 18:19:45)

It is in o_O



Mritha -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/9/2011 18:24:31)

Ahh so it is. My apologies I must have missed that the first time.



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (5/9/2011 18:29:38)

Do not worry Ma'am



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (6/2/2011 13:54:54)

Curious fact about me, negative feeling are what gives me inspiration



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (6/23/2011 20:19:32)

Posted some poetry



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (9/15/2011 17:40:41)

hey dudes I wans wondering if I should make a history for my chaos weaver nation character Ra'aret and I was thinking of writting about an adventurer that spent too much time in the void or in the shadow real, I still haven't decided, what do you think it's best guys?, that lost his humanity and wants to turn other beings in creatures like himself, or you think I should finish Path to madness first?



aizenv3 -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (9/15/2011 17:42:37)

Finish what you have now so your ideas wont be scattered, and you will become a scatter-brain if you just stop leaving a stroy in mid-air to do another one.

~Aizen V.3



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (9/15/2011 17:43:59)

lol I am already a scatter brain, hmm I'll revise what I did the last time in path to madness and I'l start with the new chapter now, but do you like the concept?



aizenv3 -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (9/15/2011 17:58:36)

The concept is original, I can tell you that at the least.



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (9/15/2011 18:03:23)

Thxs, btw I did some small tweaks here and there in Path to madness, care to check them out, I want to be sure that it's understandable, anda pleasure to read



Mortarion -> RE: Criticism of A path to madness (9/15/2011 18:10:26)

Could someone check the mistakes I did, please i tweaked so it isn't so repetitive with the name



Glais -> RE: Mortarion's collection of tomes (9/16/2011 2:44:17)

Interesting twist there, what with the name change and added details (such as Mort/Cruor and Malorum being from another country and such).
I did catch a few spots where "Bosterblader" was still there instead of Cruor, nameley at the beginning and in Cruor's first flashback.



Mortarion -> RE: Mortarion's collection of tomes (9/16/2011 10:45:58)

Ups I'll fix it up asap, and a little twits, Malorum is latin for Evil and Cruor is latin for blood/bloodshed



Glais -> RE: Mortarion's collection of tomes (9/16/2011 10:50:21)

Heh cool, why DID he change his name anyways?



Mortarion -> RE: Mortarion's collection of tomes (9/16/2011 10:54:00)

well he didn't changed his name, but you'll see it soon



The Hollow Soul -> RE: Mortarion's collection of tomes (10/5/2011 21:07:25)

I very much enjoyed the story Mort, a few Grammatical errors here and there, but over all good storyline.
my only tip would be to keep adding fixes to your grammar and to keep explaining your characters with as much detail as you can.
Keep up the good work [:)]



Mortarion -> RE: Mortarion's collection of tomes (10/5/2011 21:11:02)

This is chapter 1, it's meant to explain Mortarion :), so care to tell me what you liked the most?



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