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Dark Savant -> RE: Artists Unite! The Rebirth! (4/3/2011 14:40:30)
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@sands of blood: That's an incredibly detailed armor. I love it! The gem/light parts look great shading wise. The steam punk-sh skygaurd colors fit steam punk-ish armors. Personally I think it would look good chrome because it look more techno to me, but meh, that's just my opinion. I suppose the cyborg part would be with internal organs? Much like General Grievous(Spelling?) from Star Wars looks complete robot, but he's a cyborg because they used his brain and eyes(and more parts, I think?).
@Shinobi Shadowmaster: The hilt, as Aguila mentioned, does look a bit off kilter. I think I can see you were trying to make a slight perspective on it, but all the different extrusions make it look "off kilter". Either that or you were trying to make the back section of the hilt lower to complement the front part, because it has a guard. Again, as Aguila mentioned (and put it, for that matter), the blade does look more like ripped paper than a blade. I can see little parts of it trying to make it look 3-dimensional but they're just too small. However, what I DO like about the sword, is the similarity in each side of the blade, and the handle (Aside from that sharp bit on the bottom).
Also, I'm sorry that I gave this to you AFTER you stop working on the sword. DX
@Aguila: I can't tell if the handles are from the "Real" versions, or not. The blue handle looks the most real. O_o But great flashing, animation, design(Even though it's pretty heavily influenced from Star Wars?), shading. The whole enchilada. The only piece of "bad" criticism I have is that, if they are indeed supposed to be exactly like Star Wars, they are a little thin in the handles, and the blades(Whatever you call them on light sabers =I) are roughly half the thickness they should be. On top of the same criteria, the insides should be whiter. Yeah, I can't believe I'm nerdy enough to call that out.
BTW I like your little watermark thing. I know it's not what you're putting up for criticism, but I just felt like pointing it out. XD
@Demonic Sage 23: (The following[telecast does not reflect the... OK sorry. =/] criticism can be taken for both of your blades, because they're so similar.) The Blades both have a great design. They look well-balanced and easy to swing around (Which is just how I like my swords, dunno about other people =P). Of course, as much as you saw this coming, I can't go by idly without saying that they would look thousands of times better with shading.
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