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6/27/2008 0:24:23   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!
Here are my dabblings in Poetry. If you think I need to give a description for each poem let me know.


The Student........ Distance........ On My Knees
Glimpses........ Alska's Lullaby........ Pursue
Crushed......... Verily........ Anew
Thorn in My Side........ Use Me........ Slipped Again
Bubble........ Dragon's Call........ A Simple Song
Sit Upon........ Better Than........ Price of Gain
Living Up........ Inheritance
Zombie........ Enough
Silence........ Your Hand
The Olympics........ Lost
Close Yourself Up........ What You Do Have
Limerick attempts........ Haiku
Amber Waves Perished........ What May Come
Unknown........ Tornado
A Conversation........ Broken and Torn
Touch........ Empty Heart
Sigh........ I'm Only Alive With You
Borrowing Bathrooms........ Silver Lining
No One........ Forgotten
Stand Tall........ In the Silence
So Very Alone........ All too Aware
Selfish........ Slate Grey Sky
Stolen........ Crossroads
Dear Sons
on memories, the soul and gentle breezes
3 New haiku........ 3 Senryu


< Message edited by Eukara Vox -- 10/23/2014 18:39:20 >
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7/3/2008 23:36:40   
Firefly
Lore-ian


 Hey, I know it'll be a while before you'll see this, but I'm gonna say this anyways 'cause I like to leave comments. =P And I want to read your poetry anyways. =P

I read Verily. The imagery and power of the piece were awesome. However, I'm a bit confused about the structure.

quote:

Shattered amidst the dark walls,
tall, strong, full of doubt
weakly a tattered thought falls.

Grime smeared floor reaches out
grasping, smothering,
Infusing thought with unending doubt.

When I first read these lines, I thought you were doing a terza rima poem (ABA, BCB, ect, until it ends in one line, in this case, a simple C) However, when I ventured further, I realized that it wasn't what you were doing... I felt a bit... misled... I suggest you change the bolded line so that it doesn't rhyme with the stanzas of the next lines if you are just going for ABA, CDC, ect. Makes it less confusing for people like me. Of course, that's just my opinion since I'm retarded about poetry structures...

Overall, it was very amazing! My poetry structure stupidity is my own fault...

EDIT: Almost forgot to do this. I claim this page in the name of sanity. Dunno why. Just a random claim...

< Message edited by Firefly -- 7/3/2008 23:37:37 >

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7/9/2008 22:11:00   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Ahh, poor Firefly. *patpats and snugs*

Structure....I have no idea what poetic structure is, what it is named and what it entails. Ask Clyde. I write and whatever happens, happens. I wrote the first stanza of Verily and what you see is what came about. The first and third lines rhyme. The second line is 5 syllables that contain words that support the thoughts of lines 1 and 3. I highly doubt that is a "structure" listed in any book.

As to changing the second line of stanza one...I like and greatly desire that those words and phrase be used there, but any re-arrangement of them disrupted the rhythm of the second line.

Sometimes I follow a set structure and sometimes it is the wild imaginings and freakish stuff that comes out of my brain. And then there are my acrostics, free verse and blank verse...

Blank verse - someone once said I write blank verse. I have yet to look it up to see what that means. Perhaps I should.

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7/9/2008 22:21:12   
Firefly
Lore-ian


 According to my understanding, blank verse is poetry with structure but without rhyme. I might be wrong, but I might not be...

Good for you for not following structure. My poetry is dying in the modern world due to its structuredness.
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7/10/2008 20:21:37   
garnetdragoness
Member

Eukara, your uniqueness is what makes you so special.
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7/17/2008 2:21:27   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 I have written a new poem. Amazing!
Enough

Thank you Garnet. That means a lot.

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7/17/2008 3:07:22   
~Shade~
Member

*reads* *likes* *finds no errors* *is happy*

Yet again, Eukara, you've managed to astound me. How do you do it?

~Shade~
Post #: 7
7/18/2008 20:11:22   
garnetdragoness
Member

you are most welcome! your newest work-very nice.

*I poke you to go read "Pressure". I think you will like.
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8/5/2008 22:13:17   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 I give you Silence.

Spontaneous poem written on IRC after Amboo decided to post a poem about silence because it was...well...silent in channel.

< Message edited by Eukara -- 8/5/2008 22:20:10 >
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8/5/2008 22:54:46   
time losh
Member

I'm not good at commenting poetry, I never get it.

But i've read a few of 'em so far ^^ so far Zombie is my favorite, write more Eukara
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8/15/2008 3:28:51   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 New poem! This is about as close to a love poem as I will get...at least for now.

Your Hand
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8/16/2008 7:03:28   
garnetdragoness
Member

oh my, 3 new ones have appeared since I last visited! I like, I like! *on a sidenote-was so glad you enjoyed "Flight of the Dragonflies".
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8/16/2008 11:10:42   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Thanks Garnet! *hugs*

Well, MM and I did a collaborative poem, which was an honor for me. We wrote about the olympics. Hope you enjoy. All comments are to be directed to his thread please.
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8/16/2008 20:59:57   
leon lionheart
Member

Glad you finished it. Just finished reading it and I love it, quite meaningful and easy to get. Naturally I have no idea on what makes a good song but if someone asks I will refer them to this song.

Anywho thanks for posting it up.
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8/25/2008 13:51:59   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 I have a new poem!

Lost
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8/25/2008 14:05:49   
Firefly
Lore-ian


 That was really beautiful. I love your language. Only thing negative to say isn't really negative to say isn't really negative, just that it seems on the shorter side for lyrics, though it could be a song with music rather than words dominant in which case, it's fine.
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9/10/2008 1:18:25   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 New poem.

Close Yourself Up
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9/10/2008 6:26:05   
garnetdragoness
Member

sniff, sniff..... I....I....need a hanky....
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9/10/2008 15:53:19   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Ahhhh. *gives Garnet a tissue*

Another one. Hopefully more uplifting. Sequel to Close Yourself Up.

What You Do Have


And Oh, you will see a lot of poetry from me for the next 9 weeks. I am practicing my skills for my poetry class I am teaching. So each week will feature a new type of poetry. This week is rhyme schemes.

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9/10/2008 20:12:37   
garnetdragoness
Member

very nice. I liked it very much.
*accepts tissue and blows nose....ahhhh much better
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9/26/2008 15:18:50   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Well, here are the poems for week # 3 class. I will put up the last two sessions later as they are longer poems that were written in a note book! Enjoy.

Limerick attempts
Haiku
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9/26/2008 15:27:55   
Sairex the Dragwolf
Member

*applaud*

That poem was magnificent! The genious rhymes and the emotions. I could hear the auhtor sing this ballad and I loved it.

...I won't comment on the haiku's...I don't like haiku's.
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9/27/2008 17:32:59   
Brynn Summers
Winter-Spring 2009 Honoured Writer


 I love your new poems!
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9/28/2008 16:24:51   
garnetdragoness
Member

read all the new ones Eukara....very nice


ooh I get to claim a page! sweeeeet! I claim this in the name of dragons!
Page claiming is not allowed. - Cow Face

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 6/3/2009 13:17:56 >
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9/28/2008 20:33:54   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Thank you Garnet, Brynn and Sairex. You guys are awesome.

And I am assuming that Garnet, since you've claimed that you've read my newest, you have read the one I didn't add to my comments thread.

Here is one of the poems from Week#2 in class. We explored several different rhyme schemes found by published poets. The assignment was to pick out 2 rhyme schemes that we studied or create your own. I picked AABAB. SO, yeah, here it is.


Amber Waves Perished
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