Okay... I havent read part 2 yet... and I still remember the summary of part 1... so here I go!
quote: THe bolded word needs a space from the elipsis (...) and should be capitalized for it can stand on its own as a sentence.
“Okay, we’ve been training for half a week, and still nothing…you mastered your initial powers in a few hours and yet after all this time, we haven’t even discovered what our actually powers are! ‘Tight not be worth it!”
so I think I know what that means…’tight’
Small error but the 1st apostrophe is facing the opposite way
The rest of the group seems to take some humor to this, but not Andria nor her brother. The brother sadly sighs, before stating, “I might have had a name at one..."
You lack the bolded characters
The brother admits, “I don’t know
,” as he lower inged his shoulders as if to confirm this , before continuing, “The only thing I can think of would be…Ronin.”
Can you see the Visions?