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10/7/2011 14:40:44   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Here is a list of all of my stories that I have ever written! I hope you enjoy reading them, as much as I have writing them!

Mogloween 2010 (The Z Virus)

Welcome Giving 2010 (Zee Doctor)

Frostval Part 1 (The Capture)

Frostval Part 2 (The Strike)

Sneevil Civil War Story (My First Collaboration)

Ravenloss War Part 1 (Turn Heroes Against One Another)

Ravenloss War Part 2 (Nix Defeated)

Ravenloss War Part 3 (Rock, Paper, Greed?)

Hidden Blades (Karikor!)

Hidden Blades (Jail Bird No More)

Friday the 13th War (Serenity Okami, Saber, Megakyle, and Draketh Saga)

Stephen Nix's Backstory!

Fairy War Saga (Mritha, Melissa, Gianna Glow, Peachii Saga)

Frostvale With Nix / A New Breed of Heroes Rises! (Small Story with APR)

The Black Book, From Within (Therril, Alanna, Shadow, and Razor Saga)

The Pheonix Will Rise! (APR Backstory!)

Friday the 13th War (Wargoth Side Story) <- NOT COMPLETED YET!

A Chairman's Work Is Never Done (Battle Between Chairman, and Artix. THEN Artix vs Stephen Nix.)

Frostvale Story (Featuring many heroes!)

AQ One time story - Necros vs Paladins - Nix vs Artix

The Guardians Have Arrived! (Celestial Guardians Backstory!)

Dragon/Rose War Story (Featuring Raharu)

Penguin Hour / Friday the 13th 13th (Short Story)

Cold as Ice, a story of FEAR! / The Change with Stephen Nix

Part Two of the Mystery Attacker

Coming Soon Stories...Don't consider these to be in order:

Schools Out of Session
Collab with Faerdin

Hope you enjoy my stories, comment here!

If you have any questions about any of my past stories or current stories, let me know! Thank you!

< Message edited by Stephen Nix -- 5/25/2015 0:52:22 >
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10/7/2011 15:03:34   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Here come the typos as requested.
quote:

Kyle: *yawns* What that Ash?

What is or What's
quote:

Kyle: *Grabs Mritha by both shoulders to basically tell her to get a grip* There are plenty of other heroes here in falconreach, I'm sure I can help you out with this.

Falconreach
quote:

Melissa: Well our day usually goes as Mother walks us up for training outside

wakes
quote:

As the three walk inside they each get out their weapons and defeat the reaming undead still inside then

not sure if that is remaining or roaming
quote:

Mother Fairy: Just on time soldier, these two hooligans have caused enough trouble fro us and need to be evacuated

for
quote:

King Herald: Silence Mary, Gianna Glow wha seems to be the problem?

what
quote:

Kyle: Yes *chuckles* I suppose, but also to give help to an old friend of mine. *stares at Mritha and Melissa and their each get up*

and they, or as they
quote:

Mystic Mother: But with a heavy heart I know that you carry, I apologize for I cannot do such a thing! See this creature is technically still alive, for if it was possible I would've been able to rise my husband who pasted back in the Fairy Wars!

passed away?
quote:

Mystic Mother: *grinds his teeth then sighs* Your right.

her
quote:

Laughs as black smoke surrounds him and kyle as they teleport to Nix's fortress

Kyle
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10/7/2011 15:16:55   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

A Pheonix Risen showed up to defeat the darkness kept within it!


Phoenix

During the conversation Melissa has with the villager I get the impression the villager is an elderly woman.

I've got something else now, but I'll continue once I can.
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10/7/2011 15:17:10   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Thanks Mritha, got them!
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10/7/2011 15:35:42   
  Gingkage
Wolf Rider


 I'm probably not as thorough as Mritha, but here are some I found in the third chapter.

quote:

"Mother Fairy: Just on time soldier, these two hooligans have caused enough trouble for us and need to be evacuated out of the kingdom at once!"

'Evacuated' should probably be *exiled or *escorted, I'm not sure what you meant here, but I would use one of those words if it were me. Just a suggestion, though.

quote:

"Mritha: YOUR THE LOSER!"

Your should be *YOU'RE.

quote:

"Stephen Nix: I knew I should've just thrown you back in the book where you cam from! You'll be sorry for that little mistake!"

*Came, not cam.

quote:

"Stephen Nix: Pipe down, loser hero! Your not going anywhere just yet!"

Your should be *You're.

quote:

"Mystic Mother: *grinds his teeth then sighs* Your right."

Again, it should say 'you're.'

quote:

"Stephen Nix: Were going to depart right now but if you wish to ever see Kyle again, I suggest you send your strongest warriors to my fortress, WE will be waiting!"

It should read 'We're.'
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10/7/2011 16:18:09   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Got those as well thanks Ging!
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10/7/2011 16:43:52   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 It seems like I wasn't the only one thinking about putting in music.

quote:

and ever sense Mritha lost her mother and father

quote:

But sense Fae has left the forest

quote:

Ever sense she lost her parents, Melissa and the ladies of the kingdom have been looking after her.

quote:

Melissa you've grown up so much sense you were just a little speck of dust.


since

quote:

Anevilsorcerermadehercorruptedwhenhestoleherheartandblackenedinordertocontrolher.


Anevilsorcerermadehercorruptedwhenhestoleherheartandblackeneditinordertocontrolher.

quote:

THE BOY SHALL BE SACRIFICED TO THE GODS!


Any in particular? (Might make the threat sound more dire.)
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10/8/2011 14:20:38   
Shadow Ravena
Paladin of Shadows


 Nice Nix! I was wondering when you were making a comment thread ;)
Great story- well written, good supence. Nice to see some characters from a different L&L show up (*coughSurtcough*), as well as that background.
The only question I have is who the Mystic Mother is- is she suppose to be the queen, or some random fairy?
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10/8/2011 18:49:31   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Tigerlady - Thanks for commenting!

and its from here in the 3rd part....

After several hours we go back inside and read about King Herald, the ruler of The Grove and the Mystic Mother.
Mritha: Hey, you know I wonder what she looks like.
Melissa: She's probably a Queen herself, with a big white dress and a fancy staff that can do very powerful magic.

So yeah, she's basically the big picture when it comes to fairy talk! Shes the queen of the fairies!
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10/8/2011 19:01:13   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 @Stephen Nix: What of Maeve? Isn't she the rightful queen of the fairies?
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10/8/2011 19:34:27   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Who says that Maeve isn't the mystic mother who knows HAHA

quote:

It seems like I wasn't the only one thinking about putting in music.


Ive been putting music in ALL of my stories I think I've ever written there's at least 1 song!

New story up part 4! I hope you enjoyed this saga!

< Message edited by Stephen Nix -- 10/15/2011 19:24:52 >
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2/25/2012 21:43:12   
Mritha
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 Read through your latest story, I totally think you should call Therril, Kenny in the next part. Mehehehehehe >:)

But seriously, good job, Nix!

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2/26/2012 2:05:34   
Therril Oreb
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 *pushes Mritha of a cliff* AAAAANYWAAAAY...

Nice Nix, I so far really like it. I already wanna read the next part ^^0
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2/26/2012 12:04:29   
True Mortal
Member

Very intruiging story so far. Looking forward to the next part!

~TM
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2/26/2012 12:04:52   
  Gingkage
Wolf Rider


 *watches Therril push Mritha* You realize that she can fly and now Odgne's going to kill you, right?

*on topic* I enjoy reading your stories, even if you are an undead penguin. :P Can't wait for the next segment.

< Message edited by Gingkage -- 2/26/2012 12:05:21 >
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2/26/2012 19:27:30   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Part 2 is up, what do you think?

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2/26/2012 22:05:28   
Jorath
Advocator of Wills


 It's got my attention right now, I love that part where

quote:

Fan 1: ZOMG! It really is her!
Alanna Zelen: *shakes her head*
Fan 2: Vill you sign ze paper Miss Zelen, I'm a huge fan of yor verk.
Alanna Zelen: These people are everywhere, even in the real world.
Shadow Ravena: I wish I had fans following me around!
Fan 3: OHHHHH!!! Alanna you're sooo cool, can I bez a Loremasters? I want to meet the Register of the Loremasters. I hear he's boss!
Therril Oreb: Yea, I can see this getting to be VERY annoying on your part Alanna!
Alanna Zelen: Give me a second guys...

Alanna stands up and points her staff at the 3 followers and zaps one with lightning, and freezes the other two with an ice spell...


I must admit, this is hilarious, and no one would want to be annoyed by some fans in the midst of an arena.

I am looking forward to the next part of this story.

< Message edited by Leon ShadowHart -- 2/27/2012 22:53:09 >
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2/26/2012 23:11:01   
Faerdin
Rune Knight


 Undead Guffer... HAVE YOU NO PITY, NIX? D:<
Anyways, I've thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. It's not written in the more traditional fashion (This feels more like the writings for a script than for a novel, which allows more freedom and usage of imagery), but your writing still paints a very vivid picture that is difficult to resist watching. I also think it's hilarious when we're ordered to listen to music while we read (Respect points for using a song from the Critical Hits Album; it was one I had always liked, too). Definitely going to be keeping my eye on this! Also:
quote:

She stares at Raven....but he's still daydreaming....

Therril Oreb (in his dream): Wow Alanna, you're so pretty!
Alanna Zelen: *blushes* Aww, thank you! You're very powerful! Not to mention, your also a smart and mega cool friend! I'm so glad I met you.
Therril Oreb: *holds her hand* I love you Alanna!
Alanna Zelen: *hugs*
Shadow Ravena: You guys make such a cute couple, here I'll go upstairs and leave you two alone....

In real life...

Shadow Ravena: *snaps her fingers to Therril, whose still day dreaming* SNAP OUT OF IT!
Hehehe... xD
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2/27/2012 0:37:04   
Jorath
Advocator of Wills
quote:

Undead Guffer... HAVE YOU NO PITY, NIX?


Having an undead Plushie Cysero is even more pitiful... How dare you, Nix.
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2/28/2012 8:26:31   
Shadow Ravena
Paladin of Shadows


 Loving the story Nix! Not usual format, more game-like, but it fits you. Love the way your doing Shadow ( ) and the others. No real complaints, and I will be keeping an eye on this.
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2/29/2012 10:22:54   
  San Robin
Modzerella


 Nice work Nix!
You may be an evil penguin but you can write a heck of a story :D
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2/29/2012 11:43:46   
Varen6398
Friendly!, Constructive!
Creative!


 Nice Nix! I would comment on catching you but it would be to let you finish writing your story before I take you off to the Celestial Sanctuary. So any idea when you are going to start on TCG's backstory? I for one am willing to wait a while. You have all the time in the world...

What would have been really interesting in your story (about Therril, Shadow, Razor and Alanna) would be if you froze the water and told them to swim to the puzzle pieces...

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3/1/2012 6:52:02   
Alanna Zelen
Friendly!

 

 *laughs, sips tea* Perfectly put Nix. A whole heaping of humor :P Keep going.

Though... for extra lols.. (sorry about this one Raven) make him blurb out something during a contest :P Just so Nix catches on XD

I love humor ^^

< Message edited by Alanna Zelen -- 3/1/2012 7:00:28 >
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3/9/2012 14:46:58   
  Stephen Nix
Penguin Lore Keeper (DF)


 Part 3 is up, can they survive my water tank and collect the puzzle pieces? Find out now! Also I have done something that most people don't in stories and now you are in the story too! Can you beat my puzzle?

Thanks for the comments thus far!

quote:

So any idea when you are going to start on TCG's backstory?


Don't know. I know that APR's first, then maybe something in between, then it'll be yours!

< Message edited by Stephen Nix -- 3/9/2012 17:04:24 >
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3/10/2012 12:51:32   
Voodoo Master
Member

Great stories! I love the way you write them, like they are entries from the pedia! :D

And the fact your stories are filled with so many familiar faces from the forums is great as well.

Job well done
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