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4/26/2019 6:10:24   
NagisaXIkari
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Two new chapters and updated the OP with brief summaries of all three stories as well as two new ideas for future stories.

We're approaching the climax with the conclusion of the brief Dunwich arc.
DF  Post #: 26
4/30/2019 7:51:58   
NagisaXIkari
Member

New chapter up. Two more chapters until it's caught up with where the original "Ocean of Hopelessness" left off and then it's into new and exciting territory that is post-chapter forty.
DF  Post #: 27
5/1/2019 8:03:25   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Chapter thirty-nine up. Combined aspects of chapters thirty-nine and forty from the original work so as to put more focus on the Soulweaver in chapter forty.

And on that note, outside of the ending, I'm actually not sure how I'm going to get that ending. Initially going for fifty chapters plus an epilogue, but it's looking like it'll end before then at least not without resorting to an ungodly amount of filler which I don't want to do. Of course ending before the initial count isn't actually a bad thing either.

Also edited the OP to state when the upcoming story "The Hunter," will take place. Basically another post-Book 3 story.

< Message edited by NagisaXIkari -- 5/1/2019 8:10:33 >
DF  Post #: 28
5/2/2019 12:25:20   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Chapter forty up. And I don't do planning or anything, so it's all unexplored territory from here to the finish line.
DF  Post #: 29
5/3/2019 7:16:47   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Fourth interlude up to start this new journey into the conclusion.
DF  Post #: 30
5/4/2019 7:17:06   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Forty-first chapter up. Thinking this will likely be around forty-five chapters plus epilogue when it ends.

Not having any luck on coming up with a title for the next story. Thinking "After the Fall," as it is about the Rose following the loss of Epsina Rosa. Somebody, anybody, tell me what you think.
DF  Post #: 31
5/4/2019 15:03:41   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


In terms of a title? Do you mean Espina Rosa? I mean, "After the Fall" is fine. "The Wilting Rose" could be another.

Unless you are going for a comedic piece I don't have any other suggestions.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 32
5/7/2019 2:07:46   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Holy cats, someone actually responded.

Anywho, "The Wilting Rose" is actually a better title. Still relates the setting as well as relating to the themes of the story, so I'mma use that one.
DF  Post #: 33
5/8/2019 8:25:35   
NagisaXIkari
Member

After much dawdling, the forty-second chapter is up. The next chapter is looking to be the conclusion.
DF  Post #: 34
5/9/2019 6:16:11   
NagisaXIkari
Member

And with that, "Ocean of Hopelessness: Redux" has concluded and "The Wilting Rose" will begin at some point.
DF  Post #: 35
5/12/2019 6:43:20   
NagisaXIkari
Member

From this point on, unless stated otherwise, any updates will pertain to "The Wilting Rose" which is currently a prologue and three chapters deep.

Much like how "A New Home" began as a coming of age story and "The Long Dark" a mystery thriller, this one starts off like one of them ragtag bunch of misfits adventure stories. Although those stories didn't really have a Forgone Conclusion.
DF  Post #: 36
5/16/2019 10:38:58   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Fourth chapter up. Also went back to the first chapter and gave Roland a rank. Not much on the structure of The Rose and their rankings, so I went with Captain.
DF  Post #: 37
5/22/2019 2:36:04   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Fifth and sixth chapter up. Would've gotten the fifth chapter up soon, but got sidetracked by other things, so figured might as well make it a double.
DF  Post #: 38
5/29/2019 16:07:03   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


This feedback is for the Intro and Chapter I of "The Wilting Rose".

quote:

As not to divert resources from Amityvale and elsewhere, a team was set to be assembled and begin their investigation, corroborating with The Rose stationed in the walled town as well as conduct interviews with the townspeople to find out all that they could about the alleged town of Arkham and its asylum.

What are you trying to say here?

quote:

She looked directly at him, the glasses magnifying her green eyes, showing she's not blind which was a relief.

that she wasn't, came as

quote:

Skimming the roster, all but one of them had multiple infractions and disciplinaries for various forms of misconduct that it's surprising they are still within the ranks of The Rose.

it was, were


All in all not too bad. Would you like me to continue with the commentary or would you prefer no more feedback of this kind?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 39
5/31/2019 4:25:39   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Corroborate wasn't the best word in that context. My grammar is garb, so it's quite welcome. Also it's just nice to know someone is actually reading this and I'm not just shouting into the void for the better part of two years. Absolutely astounding how long I've been going on with this series.

Anywho, after much delay due to things, the seventh chapter is up and work on the eighth has begun. Started it yesterday, but started nodding off.

Also I began work on "The Hunter," but won't be posting it until after "The Wilting Rose" concludes as I don't want to juggle multiple stories.
DF  Post #: 40
6/5/2019 8:12:22   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Eighth chapter up after working on it for a couple days. This is probably the most challenging work I've done so far more so than what I said regarding "Ocean of Hopelessness." If not for Foregone Conclusion being in effect and wanting to actually at least create the idea that something could maybe be done rather than saying no, this chapter probably would've came out sooner.
DF  Post #: 41
6/8/2019 8:46:56   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Ninth chapter up and considerably shorter than the ones that came before it, but we do get some insight on Kid.
DF  Post #: 42
6/13/2019 7:48:35   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Back at that length with chapter ten. First interlude is also up.
DF  Post #: 43
6/16/2019 8:56:54   
NagisaXIkari
Member

Eleventh chapter up and finally getting to what the story is supposed to be about.
DF  Post #: 44
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