Slayer Zach
Yellow Fellow
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Extra dialogue and a few corrections for The Temple of Gloom: quote:
Monsters (2) Jungle Fury (6) Oogabooga (1) Pip (2) Swamp Shambler (1) Wyvern Monsters (2) Jungle Fury (8) OogaBooga (1) Pip (1) Swamp Shambler (1) Wyvern Note: There is one additional Swamp Shambler, but it cannot be reached, as there is no path leading to it. quote:
Guardian Fortuna: The Earth Orb is in two halves?! How will we ever find the nature orb after so long!? Guardian Fortuna: The Earth Orb is in two halves?! How will we find the Nature Orb after so long!? (italic code for "two halves", the word "ever" is also not written in-game and should be removed) quote:
Valencia: What...what are you doing here? Valencia: What... what are you doing here? (missing a space) quote:
Trey Surehunter: I am after a treasure, and the key is in the temple. Trey Surehunter: I'm after a treasure, and the key is in the Temple. ("I'm" instead of "I am", Temple is spelled with a capital T) quote:
Trey Surehunter: The orb of nature. Trey Surehunter: The Orb of Nature. (capital O and N for Orb and Nature, respectively) quote:
Trey Surehunter: The orb of nature is important enough that it shouldn't be lost. It should be in it's rightful place... Trey Surehunter: The Orb of Nature is important enough that it shouldn't be lost. It should be in it's rightful place... (Capital O and N for Orb and Nature again. "it's" is a typo (in-game) and should be spelled as "its") quote:
Valencia: In a Museum? Valencia: In a museum? (lowercase M for museum) quote:
Valencia: Be careful <Character>. The ground looks unsafe here. Valencia: Be careful, <Character>. The ground looks unsafe ahead. (missing a comma, ahead is what is written in-game instead of "here") quote:
<Character>:... <Character>: ... (the encyclopedia missed a space here) Start OMG, no. Yeah......there's no turning back now. Sorry. Choice 1: Go up Trey Surehunter: I am really glad we brought him/her along. Valencia: Come on, daddy. We should probably go looking for him/her. Try again (Starts over) Go down (Goes to choice 2) Choice 2: Go up (Goes to choice 3) Go between Trey Surehunter: Wow, he/she caught some distance on that one! Try again (Starts over) Choice 3: <Character>: That was a close one... Go up Trey Surehunter: Dang, I thought he/she was gonna make it that time. Valencia: Oi. If he/she's still on fire when we get there, YOU're going to be the one to stamp it out this time. Valencia: I almost ruined my shoes last time! Try again Trey Surehunter: ...Really? Yes, really (Starts over) Go between Valencia: That wasn't even fair... Try again (Starts over) Go down (Safe and sound!) quote:
<Character>: I'd comment on how ridiculous that was, but I need to double check that I'm not on fire. <Character>: I'd comment on how ridiculous that was, but I need to double-check that I'm not on fire. (double-check instead of double check) quote:
Trey Surehunter: Hey kid, you didn't happen to memorize the pattern, did you? Trey Surehunter: Hey kid.. you didn't happen to memorize the pattern, did you? (2 periods instead of a comma) quote:
Valencia: Hey...<Character>? Valencia: Hey.. <Character>? (2 periods, and a space) quote:
<Character>: NO! <Character>: NO. (a period instead of an exclamation point) quote:
<Character>: This... something doesn't feel right. <Character>: This.. Something doesn't feel right. (2 periods, capital S for "something") Keep going (Moves forward) Go back Yeah......too bad. You have to keep going! quote:
<Character>: Well hemmo, bananaman. Francy a jam around the moleburry bush? <Character>: Well hemmo, bananaman. Francy a jam around the moleburry boosh? (bush is spelled as boosh) quote:
Trey Surehunter: Help me get him up, kid. Trey Surehunter: Help me get him/her up, kid. (him/her depending on character gender) quote:
<Character>: It's...it's...a loop made out of... of fruit? <Character>: It's... it's... a loop made out of... of fruit? Complete Quest (missing spaces and quest complete) Sent you the whole source in a PM. [Niki]
< Message edited by Niki -- 3/23/2015 14:23:59 >
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